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• 10/19/14 8:41 am
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MikeCreatorMaps
Lvl 45 • Master Architect
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Mind games is a minecraft puzzle/parkour/challenge map. I made it by all myself and i used MCedit. It's a short map, but i worked something like 3 month's on it, i hope you like it.
BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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Rismosch
• 10/19/2014 10:08 am
• Level 18 : Journeyman Nerd
That was the first map by you that I played.

I don't liked it. It was bad. I played the map, because the screenshots where good. Too good for that map.

2/10 Points

Things I didn't liked:

You made rules. When you use the commands right, you don't need rules -.-

The story is too fast and didn't used /tellraw.

The maze is impossible to solve, because you can't place levers in Adventuremode.

The Minisurvival is way to easy to skip.

The Quiz was incredible stupid. Of corse, there can something happen when you answer wrong, but you have to do all questions again when you fail! That's just annoying. Also question 9 is about opinion. Dirt is the easiest to get, cobble the strongest and wood the fanciest.

The Minecartpuzzle was a disaster at all. It's not said, where the minecraft comes from. The spawning of them is way to bad, because the player have to reset them. Make an infinite amount of them. Also where should the player know, that one path isn't a dead end?

The picture analysis has a not done Level.

The Golf is missing and you can stuck there (When it's not done, than didn't make it into the map!)

Most of the time, the design was bad.

Stuff that was okay:

Language wasn't bad. Don't say that you aren't english!

Parkour was very easy, but this depents on skills.

Bow was easy too, also the skills.

Good Stuff:

The story said the players name.

The maze looked great.

In a nutshell, this was one of the worst maps I've ever played. But it's playable. You didn't get the bonus, that you are a beginner, because your Profile shows some projects. Just awful.

PS: This is not a hate. It's criticism
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MikeCreatorMaps
• 10/19/2014 4:48 pm
• Level 45 : Master Architect
oh, for i forget. I like you're tips, so if u have some time, can u play my slender map, I think that's the best map i ever made and i want you're reaction to that map. I hope you can do that :)
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MikeCreatorMaps
• 10/19/2014 4:44 pm
• Level 45 : Master Architect
Thank you for this comment, I think this comment can really help me. You just said what i can do better, i will use the things u say to making a better map next time. And i'm happy that you said my english isn't bad :D. and if you read this comment, can u pls say what /tellraw, awful and criticism means in some simple english words? I don't know what it means :/
 
PS: I just suck at building, i can't do something about that.
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Rismosch
• 10/20/2014 12:39 pm
• Level 18 : Journeyman Nerd
/tellraw is a command, way more flexible than /say

[Click here for the MinecraftWiki page about commands/ tellraw]

You need raw JSON text to write what you need

[Click here for the MinecraftWiki page about raw JSON]

example:

/tellraw @p {text:"Hi, my name is Rismosch",color:green}

It says the nearest player Hi, my name is Rismosch in the color green.

Awful is kinda the same like the word bad.

Criticism is another word than reviewing, but it's harder and shows, that I am serious.

Don't say that you are bad at building, when you didn't tried it. Building needs time, many many time when you are a beginner. When you think you can build a castle in 5 minutes, than you will fail.For example in my map Chapters (WIP), I needed now 2 weeks for my castle.

Also it seems that you understanded the basics in english. A language is easier to learn, when you hear, write and speak it. I am not english too, but because of YouTube (just commenting) I am pretty good at english. ;)
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Rismosch
• 10/20/2014 12:42 pm
• Level 18 : Journeyman Nerd
PS: I will try the Slenderman map. I will comment there when I am done
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MikeCreatorMaps
• 10/21/2014 6:02 am
• Level 45 : Master Architect
ok, thank you :)
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