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craftmaster5982
Lvl 16Journeyman Architect
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Hey guys whats up? this is my first adventure map and i think its awesome so tell me what you think and if you like it post a video on youtube! THIS IS A SINGLE PLAYER MAP! ITS COOL ok its updated its not broke anymore!
Now you get the milk.

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Update #1 : by craftmaster5982 07/29/2013 8:06:19 pmJuly 30, 2013 @ 12:06 am UTC

Map Is Officially Up YAY!

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joshsteele4ever
07/29/2013 9:16 pm
Level 28 : Expert Artist
Not bad.
Two issues:
Command block that TP's you to TNT place is broken
When you are TP'd to the place with the bed you glitch out and can't move.

Also, it would be awesome if you made the map longer and more challenging. Just a tip.
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Reer123
07/29/2013 8:14 pm
Level 70 : Legendary Terraformer
Just Some Advice for Starting off on PMC.
Well first off I see this in a lot of peoples maps is they never hit F1, when you hit F1 it knocks out the items bar and the item in your hand so it is just plain looking at the map, or some more experienced PMC users use Chunky, a system that designs photos like shaders to make a stunning image of the map you have.

Second of all is good grammar, as I can see here you skip a bit with using u and for tell you say tel now if some people want to use this map and they look down into the grammar and see it is bad they may get turned off it.

Well just some advice, if you want to check out some examples just head over to a popular PMC account and you will see, perfect grammar and use of Chunky or Shaders.
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joshsteele4ever
07/29/2013 9:18 pm
Level 28 : Expert Artist
Ironically your Grammar is awful. And using "u" instead of you and "tel" instead of tell is not grammar. It's spelling.
If you're going to give someone advice, make sure you can live up to it too, you goof.
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Reer123
07/30/2013 8:33 am
Level 70 : Legendary Terraformer
What I was saying in overall grammar of the page and I was quoting his spelling mistakes.
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craftmaster5982
07/28/2013 10:50 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Architect
its pretty short it would be good to do a vid on youtube i think
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craftmaster5982
07/28/2013 10:44 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Architect
Tell me what u think! :)
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