that's it? I mean, the map you are showing is all? then pleas tell me how, apart from some of the chests, this map is tekkit? i mean you could just play this in vanilla and miss very little. that village you showed in the video is just a game-rendered village, with perhaps some minor changes. is there anything I missed, that would make it worth downloading?
just one tip: don't give away your map's secrets (that with the dirt blocks).
And if you make an adventuremap out of it, give it a storyline.
for a survival map, which this seems to be, there is a large lack of challenge. if you want to make it a good survival map, perhaps consider adding in some goals, at the least, and some limitations, like limited space (a bedrock wall around it,), loads of mobs(mob spawners everywhere), or limited resources.
All in all, there is lots of room for improvement, but take heart, everyone starts small.