Void - Dream Adventure Map

Hi, Danivador here!

I'm a guy who looks up random maps, and plays them in order to help creator become better.
I just finished playing your map, and there are a lot of things I would like to talk about.

(Warning! This critique contains spoilers from the map. Don't read it, if you haven't played the map!)

So, huh, I don't even know where to start.

- This map was very interesting, and unique, I was confused the whole time, which normally is a bad thing, but this map is about dreams, and we all know that dreams seem like nonsense so you achieved your goal perfectly.
- The design was astonishing, the places are very well made, and decorated, I even saw a lot of design ideas I've never even seen before anywhere, and that's big, cause I've been playing minecraft for 11 years.
- You set the mood perfectly, the sound effects, the musics, it really gave me a creepy/mysterious feeling the whole time, which is impressive.
- I saw that there was some story behind the map, I didn't really understood it all, but I guess that's part of the show.

And now some little problems I found:

- I got the 5th diary in the small red room with leaves in it, and I had to kill myself with a command, because I got locked in, the door couldn't be opened, and the leaves were blocking my way to the other side.
- I found 2 different 3rd diaries, I'm not sure if there was supposed to be 2 of them, because there was only one of the others, maybe you forgot the check if there was already one, and made another one by mistake.
- I got a key that can be placed on cyan terracotta, and I haven't figured out where could I put it, so I would appreciate if you told me in private, cause it makes me very curious.
- The room, that teleports you to the final location was missing 2 blocks on the wall, and I almost got out of the map there.
I have a feeling that you broke those blocks to put the command block down, and then you forgot to put the blocks back.
- There was a place, like a basement with cobwebs where I had to open a door with a pressure plate, but the description said it can be placed on spruce, yet the floor there was made out of dark oak, I think you accidentaly confused the two wood types, they do look similar.
- I found the 9th diary in the place where the hotels were, and then I stepped on the pressure plate that said "are you sure you want to leave?" and got teleported into a random wall underground in the middle of nowhere. Not sure if I was supposed the end up there, you should check it.
- This final one is not a problem, just a tip, if the player collects all nine diaries and puts them in the item frames at the end something could happen, like a message coming up on chat saying congratulations, or something like that.

So that's all I found, I hope you'll read this and fix these problems, because mistakes like these can ruin confusion maps, cause the player doesn't know if it's part of the map, or it's just not working properly.
But, still, this map was very good, beautiful, and gave me a feeling I haven't felt in a long time on a minecraft map. It made me very interested in the map, and made me want to ecplore every place.
Overall, very good, I'd give it an 8/10, if you fix the problems, then even 9/10.

So yeah, very pleasd with the map, I'm happy that I spent 1 hour of my life playing this.
Good luck with other maps in the future, and take care!

- Danivador out

I forgot to say, but the map is for 1.17.1