Weakness Story Map

My first custom map will be concentrating on story. It is very repetitive and short, so you are warned. Please give supportive feedback rather than spam or flaming. Not only is it my first map, but I didn't think to much into it so it wasn't more complex than it should be, as you will see if you play through it to the end.

Additional Notes

I was inspired to make it thanks to BlameTheController giving his reason for his maps at the MineCon Adventure Map panel and to the Grinchmas map, which I have watched a few playthroughs of.