My Teddy Bear Doesn't Look Okay ~ Childhood Heroes Skin Contest Minecraft Skin

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My Teddy Bear Doesn't Look Okay ~ Childhood Heroes Skin Contest

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Astronotty's Avatar Astronotty
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Hello! So, this is my very first contest entry! I hope you enjoy! This is something very different to what I usually make! But hey, it's for a contest XD!

Holy crap, this backstory is long :0! I know it shouldn't be this long, but I have a very bad habit of making things too long when it shouldn't be. XD
Backstory
It was the first year of kindergarten. A little 5 year old girl stepped out of her mother's car and they both kissed each other goodbye. Before the mother drove off, she reminded her daughter to keep her teddy bear safe. In her arms, the little girl was clutching her teddy bear. It was just your average teddy bear. It was brown, cute and fluffy. It had pink/purple ears and a big head. But what stood out most of all was its big, bright, red how sticking out from its neck. It was probably more interesting than the bear itself. Her mother wanted her to keep the bear safe because it was so expensive. She didn't know why either. Maybe it was special... somehow. But the little girl wanted to keep it safe because she loved her little bear so much. It may not have looked special, but it was special to her. Why did she bring her teddy bear to school? Well today was kindergarten's very first day of show-and-tell, and the little girl was very excited. She wanted to show her most prized possession to her whole class. She and her mother let go of each other and off the little girl ran towards the school.

But not everything was all joy and smiles as she got there. The little girl found herself standing on the playground. Still as a stick. It looked like she was dead, but she was standing up. She had a shocked expression on her face and she was clutching her teddy bear tighter and tighter. She was staring at another little girl, who was also standing still like she was. Only she had such an angry look on her face at she stared straight into the other girls' eyes. She was also clutching something. Tighter and tighter as her face grew angrier and angriest. The little girl with the teddy bear was very upset at the sight she was seeing. What the other girl was holding was a regular, brown fluffy teddy bear. It had link/purple ears and a big head. It even had a bright, big red bow across itself. It was a carbon copy of the little girl's bear. They looked exactly identical. What made matters worse was that the girl with the same teddy bear as the little girl was that she was her worst enemy. She was mean, hot headed and just plain nasty. But she was popular with all the other girls and boys. Not fair. It all started at the very first days of school when the other little girl excluded her from her game of hopscotch. Damn. When people kick you out of their game of hopscotch. Isn't that a kick in the balls?

The mean little girl was enraged. She screamed at the innocent little girl and called her a copy cat. This made the little girl afraid and she clutched her teddy even harder. But no matter how hard she clutched it, the mean girl still snatched it out of her hands. The little girl was shocked. She knew the girl was nasty, but snatching her teddy out of her hands like that? Hell no! The little girl shouted loudly for the other girl to give it back, but no. Years came out of the mean little girl's eyes as she brutally bashed and bashed the living crap out of the innocent little girl's poor teddy bear, constantly and constantly calling her a copy cat and an idiot. She started bashing it so hard that parts of the bear's fluff was starting to pour out. The little girl was crying as she ran towards the mean girl. She grabbed her and pleaded her to stop already. But it was no good. The other girl shoved her over violently and the she ended up crying even more and harder and she was lying on the ground in sudden pain. The mean girl just would not stop. Other kindergarteners started to crowd around the cat fight, but none did anything. All of them were very scared. But not as scared as that little girl crying on the ground, watching her bear getting mauled by just a kindergarten girl.

Then, so suddenly. Something enexpected happened. It's like the little tip went into a parrellel universe all of a sudden. She stopped crying and looked up in awe. All of the kindergarteners fell silent and so did she mean girl. She wasn't hurting the bear anymore. It was it her her arms. There on its feet was... the bear itself? No way. It wasn't possible. Was it just a hallucination? The bear couldn't be standing like that, like a human. Most especially since it was so battered. It wasn't possible. Then, out of nowhere, it walked! It walked and walked towards the mean little girl. She just now just as scared as everyone else by now. As scared as the innocent girl. When the reached the wall, the mean girl had nowhere to turn. She was scared and screaming. Not only was the bear alive and walking, it looked scary. Arms and legs were now replaced with ripped stuffing, parts of its ear was missing, it's how was ripped, and one eye was missing. It was even walking on a slight limp. Suddenly, the mean little girl screamed even louder. The girl on the ground shot up like she was completely fine and ran to where the screaming was. She couldn't believe what she was seeing! No! It couldn't be real! She was hallucinating! Did she really hit her head that hard on the ground? What her eyes managed to pick up was definitely not ordinary. Not at all. First walking and now... it had a trash bag in its hands and it was beating up the mean little girl? Not only that, it was talking too! It was talking very fast and no one could make out the words. But he was speaking English. He sounded like Chris Tucker. The teddy bear proceeded to b**** slap the mean girl around with this trash bag. It swoop around like some sort of badass and did it again. Smacking and slapping the mean girl. This was extraordinary! The little girl couldn't believe her eyes! Was this actually real? Was this happening right now? The mean little girl was bawling her eyes out in shock and disgust (the trash bag had maggots on it), but the teddy didn't give a damn. He continued doing it. Still banging the trash bag on the mean girl and speaking some... stuff. The bear then stopped and let the mean girl flop to her knees and fall down. The teddy bear dramatically looked at the innocent little girl who was in awe, and majestically back flipped towards her. What a badass. In his amazing Chris Tucker voice, he forced the mean girl to apologise to the little girl, which she did with no hesitation whatsoever. The little girl was convinced that she wasn't imaginating. She smiled and accepted the mean girl's apology and hugged the bear so tightly. But there was only one problem. The bear was destroyed. The bug was great. But the girl felt so bad that she couldn't help the bear from being ripped and battered like it was. She let to of the hug and in a sad face she kneed down and faced the bear.

"You don't look okay."
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Update #2 : by Astronotty 02/11/2015 3:33:20 pmFeb 11th, 2015

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02/13/2015 9:55 pm
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Jex_Infinite
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What are you talking about? It looks fiiiiine.

That backstory is way too long to leave like that. Put it into a spoiler for ease of scrolling to the comments.
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02/14/2015 2:13 am
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Astronotty
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Thank you for your feedback! And yes, I should really take your advise! I'm sorry :P.
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02/12/2015 1:12 am
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TotallyRobot
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Looks really cool :3
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02/12/2015 2:47 am
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Astronotty
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:D Thank you so much!
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02/11/2015 10:29 pm
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CyrusJazzberry
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Chris Tucker badass teddy bear.

Yes.
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02/12/2015 12:20 am
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Astronotty
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Hahah yes XD
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02/11/2015 8:28 am
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ItsmeRAPtor
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Oh my gosh! That is so cool! (First Favourite!)
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02/11/2015 2:42 pm
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Astronotty
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Thank you so much!!! :D
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02/11/2015 8:23 am
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SharkyBoy
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Don't forget to add how it's your hero and how it protects you from evil when you add the story, it's required for a contest entry.
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02/11/2015 2:41 pm
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Astronotty
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Yeah I'm getting onto that I'm sorry. I didn't know it was required when you first post the skin. I just got disqualified. When I write is it okay if I can get back in? XD
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