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Balloon Haiku

• 1/11/16 5:49 pm
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Ozziekitty
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This is a haiku I wrote, and I hope you like it! I've always wanted to fly

Balloons float sky high
Way up father than the stars
Closer than you know

Closer than you know
Float higher and higher now
I also float with it 

Before long it creaks
Louder and louder and then..
Pop! I awake safe

In my very own bed
Safe once more I run downstairs
Tell my adventure

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Butterflycraft978
• 01/11/2016 7:48 pm
• Level 54 : Grandmaster Enderdragon
Great haiku... I think you could improve it by using more words like conjunctions (for example rather than write "tell my adventure" for the last line you could write "and tell my story". :)
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Ozziekitty
• 01/13/2016 5:27 pm
• Level 22 : Expert Button Pusher
Good idea! I'll keep that in mind for next time!
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UNDERTALE_CREW
• 01/11/2016 7:18 pm
• Level 18 : Journeyman Network
Once again you're good at these! Love it! :D
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Ozziekitty
• 01/11/2016 5:50 pm
• Level 22 : Expert Button Pusher
Want more haikus? Coment and let me know your ideas!
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