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Before I start I just want to say I made this on my own and would appreciate a sub, diamond or comment! Also, sorry if I make spelling errors!
It was on that day that she knew her life was going to change. She walked in and looked around... nope... nope... YES! Here it was, so close yet so far. She looked at the tag... $20?!!?!?!??
"NOOOOOOOOO!" Bess cried as she stared at the price tag which was now swinging violently from side to side. "Why did it have to happen? WHYYY???". She was now rolling furiously on the floor, screaming and hoping this was a nightmare. A store attendant turned around to see what all the horrid shouting was about. "Would you like some help dear?" she said, just as she relised who she was talking to, Bess seemed to do the same. Bess was horrified. She suddenly stopped and looked up at the lady. She snorted in dislike as she ran away as fast as she could. She could see behind her the lady was chasing after her. Bess wasn't concentrating and before she knew it she tripped while shouts of angry people surrounded her... and it all went BLACK.
I'm not sure if I want to continue with this, please leave a comment on what you think!
It was on that day that she knew her life was going to change. She walked in and looked around... nope... nope... YES! Here it was, so close yet so far. She looked at the tag... $20?!!?!?!??
"NOOOOOOOOO!" Bess cried as she stared at the price tag which was now swinging violently from side to side. "Why did it have to happen? WHYYY???". She was now rolling furiously on the floor, screaming and hoping this was a nightmare. A store attendant turned around to see what all the horrid shouting was about. "Would you like some help dear?" she said, just as she relised who she was talking to, Bess seemed to do the same. Bess was horrified. She suddenly stopped and looked up at the lady. She snorted in dislike as she ran away as fast as she could. She could see behind her the lady was chasing after her. Bess wasn't concentrating and before she knew it she tripped while shouts of angry people surrounded her... and it all went BLACK.
I'm not sure if I want to continue with this, please leave a comment on what you think!
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