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Craftium: A PMC Original Book Series

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About the book:

In a far place over the rolling hills of Terria is a kingdom like no other. Filled with the greatest warriors in all of Minecraft. This place is known as Craftium. The palace is made out of gold, emerald, and diamond. The castle stretches so high it pasts the building limit in a single player world. There are five chosen warriors that sit high on the throne at the top of the palace. There names are Yami, master of speed and agility, Kengai, master skill, Magi, master of strength, Hiro, master of cremation, and Yamoto, master of intelligence and strategy. On the night of the eclipse a darkness arose. Destroying villages and kingdoms leading there way straight to Craftium. The five warriors held the off the darkness sending them back to the depths of the neither, but at a great cost. Hiro with his skill of creation and crafting was no mach for the darkness. All the barricades were withered away leaving him cornered. His friends tried to help him, but couldn't get there in time. The prophecy was told that one of the five shall die but one man would fill in. One that has skills of all and a heart more pure than a finding diamonds in a mine, be honest really hard to fine...The five warriors tried to cheat the prophecy and take care of Hiro, but instead the prophecy came true. They searched for many years testing everyone in minecraft, but they found no one. One day when darkness completely took over and all was left was terria a young boy was born in a tiny village way out in the country side, the child's name was Steve.

Here is my "About Book" Please let me know if you want more by giving diamonds and comments! I might make more if I get enough support. Probably do anyways for fun actually :P But give diamonds anyways! LOL
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09/19/2013 4:26 pm
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Little disorganized for a story, or an overview of one. A little more proper punctuation, line spacing, etc etc would make it a bit easier to read. As for the plot, seems interesting enough, but also seems like there's some holes- Why is it that Hiro, master of Crafting/Creation (which you misspell once) alone is no match for the darkness? Why weren't his allies with him at the time? These questions, among others, shouldn't be things that come up in a plot summary. Being vague/brief in an overview entices your readers to read the rest of the story, to find out what happens, to go in fresh without preconceptions.
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