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”„Little Light„”

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The full moon shined through the dark purple clouds. Its rays reached the forest to make the dewdrops glitter. All the forest is quiet and still.. until there is a small light floating above a lily, like a tiny star that came from the heavens. It then dreamily fluttered through a clump of forget-me-nots and flew slowly to a small door at the base of a tree. It carefully opened it and tiptoed inside...



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just an idea

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05/26/2020 10:36 am
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JollyWinter
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A few things to consider.
  - Tense issues
  - Shone instead of shined
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05/26/2020 12:37 pm
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xShadowStarx
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Ok Ill look over it
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05/26/2020 4:07 pm
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JollyWinter
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Nice opening for a story though
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05/25/2020 10:38 pm
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lexcat888
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AWESOME xShadowStarks, I love it, noce imagination, and YAY I'm a subscriber yay
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05/25/2020 10:41 pm
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xShadowStarx
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Starks I love it :D
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05/27/2020 3:22 pm
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PersonWhoPlaysMinecraft
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you're a stark now
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05/27/2020 3:28 pm
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xShadowStarx
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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05/25/2020 4:09 pm
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Angelonasher
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this is on the hot story blogs

what does that supposed to mean?

Btw, it is awesome
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05/25/2020 4:10 pm
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xShadowStarx
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The ppl like it ;3
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05/25/2020 3:25 pm
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PersonWhoPlaysMinecraft
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a great idea/start 👍
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05/25/2020 3:26 pm
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xShadowStarx
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Ty!!!! ;o
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