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3/11/2014


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A villager’s life
after a star went super nova near his planet.

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In
a normal minecraft village to the left of the great water fall
belonging to the snowy biomes was a house by its self. Well, it
wasn’t really a house; it was more like a mansion. There
were a few lights in the cold night sky and the pitter patter of soft
rain falling on the ground. Huge cliffs surrounding the house rose up
in the background making it almost look like a haunted house.


The
wooden door of the house opened and out came a young man looking like
he’d had a really bad day. This was in fact Summa the heir to the
throne of the village. Today was the day he became chief, but his
dad did not find him worthy and the ceremony had been postponed until
his dad did find him worthy. Also, his dad was going to the
underworld to stop the battle with Herobrian’s army, so it could be
a long time; this is why Summa is feeling down. Summa was walking to
his friend’s place which was on the other side of town. He muttered
to himself ‘how this can get any worse?’. He felt very bleak,
like his surroundings, walking to his friend’s; there were only a
few glowstone lights around him. Unknown to him, his worries were
going to get a lot worse.


The
rain stopped. Walking through the door and up the stairs of his
friend’s house, he found his friend Shama on the roof with his
magnified scope looking up into the night sky. Summa asked him what
was up, and Shama gave him that look when you’ve just stolen a
bunch of cookies and have been caught by your mum.


“We
are in great danger,” Shama said.


Shama
quickly explained that the star he was watching looked like it was
going to collide with the sun! Summa shook with terror as he
processed what his friend had said. After quickly running down the
stairs and flinging open the door, he ran to the water well and rang
the town bell. Out came the villagers all with questions about the
ringing. He explained what was happening and asked for suggestions
on what he should do. One of the elders remember that there was a
cave under the water fall that he’s great grandfather had found and
was buzing with redstone and explain that it could be a myth as it
had been handed down through the ages shame said that he would check
it out as most caves with redstone often contain some great power
most of them were in shock or could think of anything to say then
what had already been said he finished the meeting and went and
prepared to find the cave in which the redstone was abundant. Putting
on his gold armour picking up his diamond axe and sword and getting a
lift to and water falls and grabbing some food as he went through the
market And on to the gravel filled road.


As
he closed in on the great water falls he noticed that the biggest
water fall the one that made you deaf if you got to close for a long
period of time he had that feeling that the cave was behind that one
as the rest where very small in size and shape he said thanks to the
village who brought him to the waterfalls he quickly dismounted while
doing so the village replied “don’t mention it” walk down
towards the water fall he looked back to see the villages head
disappearing over the ledge he had just walked down. Felling alone he
was determined to find the cave quickly heading for the entrance well
what looked like it as the rocks sort of made a path to the center of
the water fall realizing he had forgot he’s shield as he realized
he would have to get wet he ran into the water fall coughing and
spluttering and then the fog disappeared opening his eyes to find
that he could see he was in.


Quickly
trying to grabbing he belt looking for he’s torch fumbling in the
dark is not something you want to try or ever have to do lighting
he’s torch he took in his surroundings redstone in the roof and the
walls stone everywhere and a ditch at the end going down in a spiral
moving away from the water fall he felt the cool air and he’s wet
body reacting to the cold air picking up his sword and walking to the
spiral of stone down he started to go down, down, down, down once and
a while kicking sand or stone bits down into the dark abysses.


Finely
the bottom the air tasted really bad now and the water fall fell
silent he missed the sound now its one of those places where you get
afraid for no reason at all. He headed down the only passage way he
could go as he stumbled along he hit the wall with his elbow and to
his amazement the wall glowed red realizing it was Redstone he ran
his hand over the wall making it get brighter as he went felling just
that bit better he increased his pace


He
came into a huge caravan and in the centre a huge rock on its side
carved out of it was bluish blackish square realizing that he had
come into an old chamber called an ender maze but he hadn’t came
through the maze meaning he had found a secret passage all of a
sudden he heard something he had not heard in a while voices!


In
came two guards’ black streaking armour huge spiked type swords and
packs on their backs quickly ducking behind a rock he surveyed them
they look like a special force of herobryan army he would be able to
take on but them both to gather where way to hard he had a plan dash
to the portal open the portal and jump threw but that would mean that
herobrains solders would just follow surveying them and thinking of
ways to escape realizing that they would not be used to bright light
grabbing his torch and throwing it directly at them while getting up
and running to them all he heard was ahh to bright and two clean cuts
later he was alone grabbing the activation stone and moving to the
ender portal placing the last key into its place a worse smell came
apparent then the one already there and it was like acid burning and
the square filled up with black liquid preparing to jump in he took
the soldiers food and iron leggings closing his eyes and clenching
his teeth 1,2,3



Where am I?, exclaimed Summa opening his eyes what the! Said summa
looking around everything was blurred minute after minute his vision
cleared but everything looked different bright light on his forehead
huge walls white as snow looking below him and seeing hundreds of
pixels picking himself up he saw that he was different and the stuff
he had transported with him was now like something out of a book
looking over he saw a door but it can’t be but it was! Looking at
it he exclaimed it’s a see threw door he had to get up using his
new body he started to try walking in his transformed body and found
that it was very hard but as he moved his fine motor skills returned
to him he had now made his way to the glass door beside this new
strange door was a blue glowing object pushing the object down
opening the door out came something he had never seen a robot the
robot detecting Shama scanned him Shama was frightened the robot said
one word follow and Shama did not Dearing to disobey followed the
robot the robot lead him into a great room with a a big machine in
the middle this machine was used to implant knowledge he was placed
on a metal table and a blue light began the shine above him that’s
all he could remember when he woke up he was in a lift then it hit
him he knew what everything was looking around he picked up a
portal-gun delighted to find he knew how to use it the elevator
stoped the doors creaked open revealing chamber one on the side of
the wall getting out of the elevator and flicking his portal-gun on
and took in his surroundings a huge wall on one side with a walkway
leading to the next chamber but the exit was to high up zap firing
his weapon at the ground and aiming at the wall next to the door zap
now all he had to do was jump into the portal poof it’s a weird
feeling like someone had poured a liquid onto you and then sucked it
off he was granulated by the robots after completing the next couple
of chambers he was taken to the mess hall where he was introduced to
the rest of the test subjects he couldn’t figure that part out test
subjects for what?? The portal guns where apparently now a big thing
and were not required to be tested any more so what was this all
about quickly forgetting this thought and grabbing his tucker and
sitting next to the others he talked for a while and realized they
were all from different worlds coming to this place differently he
asked was there any more and they said that a lot of them had gone
missing lately he tried to get out of his head what had happened to
the rest of the test subjects after that the robots had how well he
had done he didn’t find them to be that happy tho after their
meeting he went to sleep he woke up to the alarm clock on his door
opening the door and heading to break it was really the same thing
and after that went to the chambers after getting onto the test pad
he saw another test subject beside him he was told it was going to be
a race and the last one would be eliminated on of they went portal
jumping left and right he was in front by a little bit and was able
to win and other player was surrounded by the robots then bang and he
was gone a black soot was left where he was Shama got a bad felling
about this place as he realised that he had just be vaporised exiting
the chamber he realised this place was not as it seemed and
understood why he was a test subject all of a sudden the lights
flickered one and off a couple times picking up his pace he ran
towards his quarters turning a corner he ran straight into wall of
defensive drones the defense drones turned his way and armed there
laser detectors at him jumping behind the hall from witch he had just
came from


turning his
portal-gun on peep went the gun holding his breath tightening his
grip and jumping into the correr door firing the portal behind the
drones and swing around and pow blasting his gone once again at the
floor zipp straight threw the portal landing head first on the floor
picking himself up grabbing his gun and running trying to find his
way back to where he had spawned turning the corner and what he came
across was what he had feared a dead-end he had to get back in
frustration kicking the wall it made a hollow bong noise realising
it was hollow quickly looking for a lever or something that could
open it up then he noticed a strip of light that look more like it
had been pulled and tugged lots on his tippy toes and jumping up
click the door open but then got stuck the power faller must have
knocked the system down the door had only opened a little clink
clank he could here the defence droids coming quickly running to the
door and pushing with all his might but it was no use the droids
came round the side flipping his gun and firing his gun at the wall
on the other side and below him zap he made it and there it was
where he had came from running up to it activating the console and
jumping into the portal as he was being transported he saw the
robots with sad faces on there console screens he smiled as he was
teleported happy to be out of that world and back to his own waking
back up he found that he still had the portal gun then it hit him
how to save his world quickly running all the way to the water fall
walking outside into the sun shielding his eyes from the glare when
it had adjusted he drank some water and started jogging back when
he returned he ran to his friends place Shama greeted him he quickly
explained that he had found a power source that could saves his
planet he quickly went to the blacksmith who was able to get the
core out of the portal-gun taking the core to his frind who made a
switch for it using redstoned and set it to 15M and launched it from
the mountain near his house boof of it went threw the air once it
was in block orbit it exploded sucking the sun into the black hole
the core had created and bang as it sucked other stars in and then
there world was being pulled but then it seized up and pop it was
gone they had a new son that had moved closer to there or rather
there planet had moved closer everything went back to normal after
that he's dad came home to find out what his son had done and that
night gave him the village as he had shone his father that he was
worthy and the village rejoiced



THE END
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