PARTICIPANT IN A FINALISTS JAM
This Blog is an entry in the completed Love Poem Contest.

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pencil1991's Avatar pencil1991
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Rusty reds tinted with hints of gold,
Royal dress of my beloved Fall,
Crimson rain pours from atop the trees,
This Autumn incense is seducing me.

Wind is howling through the branches...
Screeching sounds of dreadful creatures-
Life is rising from its' ashes,
Fall I love all of your features!

Maiden fair whom scent of death
Has stolen all of my breath-
Clouds of fog, my heart is racing,
Golden leaves, they look like dancing,
It feels so... exhilirating!

Ode to nature's gracious fall,
All her essence in full stall,
Season which decays all gardens-
The original red carpet.
Autumn's crimson velvet carcass,
Fragile frozen crimson doll.

You're my one and only lady!
Nuanced facets of your being
Sometimes feels so complicated
To wrap my head around them all,
But somehow it feels so freeing,
I adore you so much, Fall!

I used to dream about your mystic gaze,
The mist is thick over the glazing ways-
Can barely see the road in front of me,
But the concrete school brought back reality.


Thank you for taking your time to read this!

This is a love poem I wrote back in 2019, it has 6 verses and 30 lines in total (not sure if that is the correct terminology, as I am not a native English speaker)

Is a bit dramatic but I think it is a pretty little poem and wanted to share it with you. <3

It includes several rhyming types (again, not sure if that is the correct terminology) and rhythms and was originally written to persuade a few friends that wanted to start rapping into starting with poetry instead, as to build experience in lyricism.

I submitted it to a poetry contest, during school and is published in a few obscure Romanian magazines.

I wanted to explain that as to not be accused of plagiarism, I am the original author and can provide proof if needed.

Picture isn't very related to the topic but it has the exact vibe of beauty in simplicity that I am going for.
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02/06/2021 3:02 pm
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pencil1991
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Seems my poem is not very popular :( I'll try harder next time!
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02/04/2021 11:51 am
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Cardinal System
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I like everything about this. Good theme, strong words, open to interpretation. Nice choice of a cover photo too! I think you may very well beat me in this contest. +1
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02/04/2021 12:15 pm
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pencil1991
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Hi, thank you so much for the kind words! But I must disagree, yours is a lot sweeter! <3
And it seems people agree, it is a lot more popular lmao.
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