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The Miracle - Lost At Sea

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ThatCobblestoneGuy's Avatar ThatCobblestoneGuy
Level 58 : Grandmaster Lad
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LOST AT SEA
DAY 1:My tender body stood there frozen as ice. Waves were crashing up against my boat and splashing my damp face with saltiness. I had Nowhere to go. In all the loaded chunks, not one sight of land has yet to been observed. The rocking of the boat makes me feel dizzy and nauseous. I lay there half drowning in water, as the boat sways from side to side. The current taking me to any unknown destination.
The sunset was a beautiful gleaming sight, but wasn't enough to make me feel any better. I have no idea when this ocean shall come to end. Perhaps it wont.
As night time fell upon me, i slowly fell asleep. With a few coughs and splatters of salty water i have swallowed. I have no idea how i got here. Nor do i know how i will get out.

Help me....

DAY 2:
I've awoken, my sickness has decreased. But my hunger has increased. I remember that i stored a fishing rod in one of the chests down in the basement of the boat. I go down and to grab it, but when i open the chest. There is absolutely nothing. "Who could have taken it?" I mutter to myself. "Its not like someone came and stole it..."
My stomach gurgles as a bend over the boat, to examine if any fish were lurking around the boat. No sign at all, just the calm, blue ocean. I had nothing with me. I don't think i was going to make it out alive. My boat had run out of gas. Where was I going to end up?

A few hours passed, nothing exciting had yet to be seen. Just me, the boat, and the calm blue ocean. Me sea sickness had gotten terrible, having chucked up a few times. My mind itself was starting to deteriorate. Noone knew where i was. I was alone, scared, and sick.
Survival was getting terribly hard, how was I going to survive?
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Update #1 : by ThatCobblestoneGuy 11/29/2013 7:47:56 pmNov 29th, 2013

-Added Day 2

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01/13/2014 9:47 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Dragonborn
ElEcTrIkWoLf476
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Add days 3-57 pls.
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12/12/2013 5:47 pm
Level 22 : Expert Blacksmith
I_heart_Notch
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I really like this, but it's not a story until it's done.
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11/30/2013 11:27 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Creeper Hugger
Lego_Master11
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Nowhere should not be cap
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11/29/2013 8:12 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Scribe
Jiloacom
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Faved, just so I can easily find this to check for new days/segments :)
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11/29/2013 6:56 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Scribe
Jiloacom
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Needs more story to it, right now it's just kind of boring.
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11/29/2013 7:48 pm
Level 58 : Grandmaster Lad
ThatCobblestoneGuy
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Decided to continue it. Day 2 has been added :)
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11/29/2013 6:59 pm
Level 58 : Grandmaster Lad
ThatCobblestoneGuy
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It's not so much a story, it's of a scene snapshot.
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11/29/2013 7:02 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Scribe
Jiloacom
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I think you need to add more to it, it's a pretty interesting beginning, but it ends too short.
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