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avatar ChatieTheDragon
Level 43 : Master Geek
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Hello! This is a story I wrote, and it’s kind of weird, don’t judge me.
I hope you like it, too bad if you don’t.
I’ll try to post a new chapter every Monday, but I might just post chapters whenever I feel like it.
Ok, time for the story!



Prologue

Chapter One ~ Two Years Later

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

Chapter Five


Skins of Characters:
Leighton | Liam | Jake | Allison | Queen Lilabeth | King Frederick
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Don’t ask why you don’t know who Wave Lady is. I made her up.
And I promise the next chapter will be more interesting!

I’ll add a picture once I make it. That’s going to take a while
I will also add links to the skins of all the characters once they are done.

I hope you like it so far, and yeah, it’s going to be pretty long.
Sorry about that. Thank you for reading!
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08/02/2018 9:50 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Lemon
Kawaii
A couple minutes later... OH MY GOD the moment MY EYES SANK INTO THE SCREEN I COULD'NT PULL THEM OUT... I AM SO INTRIGUED!!

OMG This story IS AMAZING. Lol I'm writing a book too! :d 80 pages so far xD Yours IS SO MUCH BETTER THOO!

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08/03/2018 12:12 am
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Thank you so much! I haven’t written a chapter in so long... I’ll start writing again soon, I promise!
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06/23/2018 10:30 am
Level 44 : Master Dragon
Jadeite
Wow I know I’m late to this but this book is amazing so far! I couldn’t stop reading!
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06/23/2018 12:31 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Thank you so much!
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05/24/2018 11:08 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Unicorn
Artsy_Lady
I know I'm late saying this but, one of my friend's name is Liam and it's so weird READING THE NAME
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05/24/2018 11:20 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Yeah that must be so wierd!
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05/24/2018 8:12 pm
Level 53 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
morningblues
Finally had the chance to sit down and read this! It’s amazing so far and can’t wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work :)
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05/24/2018 8:34 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Thank you so much!
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05/14/2018 7:05 pm
Level 45 : Master Nerd
FireBellFairy
oh my I see you were quiet tired.

I found some typos, or what I believe to be typos.
" whey would be sent there to start over. That lasted for a long time."
&
"Leogjton’s room was huge."
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05/14/2018 7:17 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
I think I got them all, thank you for pointing those out! I’m on a tablet so it’s much easier for me to make typos and to type ‘p’ instead of backspacing!😂
I know very unprofessional of me now I’m embarrassed 😞
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05/14/2018 7:09 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Oops I better go fix that...
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05/14/2018 7:39 pm
Level 45 : Master Nerd
FireBellFairy
haha its fine
its literally impossible to write on tablets. dw i feel ya' lol
But i forgot to mention how amazing the 2nd chapter is, keep up the amazing work!! <3
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05/14/2018 8:01 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Thank you so much! Now I’ll try to remember to proofread😂
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05/08/2018 7:25 am
Level 26 : Expert Artist
min mochi
okokokok
THIS IS AN AMAZING BOOK YOU SHOULD BE A REAL AUTHOR USUALLY I HATE READING BOOKS
BUT THIS IS A REAL TRUE BOOK OMGGG
and btw you should make a skin of the characters in your book

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05/08/2018 12:32 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
That’s a great idea!
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05/08/2018 5:58 pm
Level 26 : Expert Artist
min mochi
Im interested to see what they look like
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05/08/2018 6:27 am
Level 26 : Expert Artist
min mochi
Woah this is alot of writing and lotso f little details you added their almost as if im reading a real book by a real author i love it great job
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05/08/2018 12:32 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Wow thank you! I do want to make a longer version with even more details someday...
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05/08/2018 5:58 pm
Level 26 : Expert Artist
min mochi
Well im sure whatever you write is gonna be amazing and im gonna read it
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05/07/2018 4:22 pm
Level 45 : Master Nerd
FireBellFairy
i read that in about 2 minutes
that was too flipping good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05/07/2018 4:47 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Well it is short (I really do want to make a longer version) but thank you so much!
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05/06/2018 4:28 pm
Level 20 : Expert Unicorn
KatieDoo522
Oh my goodness, I was not expecting that twist at the end...
my heart
This is a great story so far: the plot seems unique, and the characters are interesting. Please keep me posted! :)
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05/06/2018 5:31 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Thank you! New chapters on every Monday, I’ll post on my wall when they’re posted!
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05/04/2018 1:12 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Demolitionist
Comrade Rick
You should write a book
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05/02/2018 5:14 pm
Level 13 : Journeyman Archer
MoonWolf13
SO EXCITED! I really like your writing style. It's a lot better than mine.
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05/02/2018 5:28 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Thank you! I’m sure your writing style is great!😄😄
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05/02/2018 4:31 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Unicorn
Artsy_Lady
Plot twist.
It was all a dream.
I BET THATS WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN!
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05/02/2018 4:34 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Haha maybe..........🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
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05/02/2018 4:05 pm
Level 45 : Master Nerd
FireBellFairy
myheartbrokeomg


i feel so bad for Leighton...

great prolouge though! Keep it up!
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05/02/2018 4:13 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
Hehehe not even the first chapter and I kill everyone the main character loves...😈😈😈

Thank you so much!
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05/02/2018 3:40 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Necromancer
TsukiaKari
I have a (bad?) habit of scanning over text when the story's current situation is fast-paced or action packed so I basically only read half of the text xD

But from what I’ve got from that half I think this will be an interesting story!
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05/02/2018 3:44 pm
Level 43 : Master Geek
ChatieTheDragon
You know, I kind of do that too! Lol thank you!
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