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The Game that kills.....
It started 2 years ago. That day was the best day at first but ended to be the most worst day ever in my life.
Christmas day, I was hopeing to get the new Xbox. I did and continued to get money. The very next day I went to go get games. I came to a yard sell whille going to gamestop. I asked if he had any Xbox 360 games. He said yes showing me a crate full of games I told him I only had $100 and he told me what games he had. I picked a few cool games call of duty WAW Halo 3 and Assassians creed. But at the conner of my eye I saw a game. I asked him about it and he told me it was free he gave me it and said he who plays is he who dies goodbye John.
I got to the car went to gamestop picked up call of duty mw2 and a new controller.
I played a few then got to the game he gave me the front said TGTK I put it in and continued to play. It said however THE GAME IS NOT ABLE TO PLAY MASON PLEASE TRY AGAIN and went straght to main menu of the game.
WAIT what just happen the game was not able to play and put me at the main menu of the game and how did it know my name?
Ignoreing that I continued to play TGTK. It was my town at the bank. A text showed up saying WHO TO KILL it had 3 names 1 my friend Jason other two were people I didnt know. I picked my friend then the game showed pictures of my friend bloody shot up and being burtaly murdered. IT IS DONE JASON IS DEAD BUT JOHN BLOOD THIRST IS NOT YET FINSHED the game said. I continued killing people in the game more and more and more untill it came to my house JOHN SEES YOU DO U WISH TO DIE YES YES wait what I clicked yes THANKS FOR PLAYING now goodbye. The game charcter came in and tryed to kill me. I ran and ran and ran untill I unpluged the game and got the game and destroyed it from that day forward iv nevered played Xbox funny thing is I killed 49 people ingame 49 people went missing even my friend jason.