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Poem- The World Of Cats

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Officerkit's Avatar Officerkit
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Cats, fluffy and cute
All playful
And a little freightful
But always a delight.

In their eyes
We might be monsters
But in ours
They are furballs of joy.

We call them pets
They call us owners
Or atleast, should
The greatest animal of all.

Their agility is the most amazing
Their playfulness is the most comforting
Their deadliness is the most rare
Their friendliness is the most sacred.

I wrote this poem at school. I really like cats, and it's a little nice that I have been thinking of my cat when I wrote this poem.
I really hope you guys like this poem, and if you don't please, PLEASE tell me why. I'm always open for feedback.
I am even more open for subscribers, diamonds, and favorites, as long as they're not similar to cake as it is a lie.

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03/02/2014 3:36 pm
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Maintrain97
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i would hope that a cat wouldn't be "freightful"... watch your spelling :D
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03/02/2014 3:35 pm
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J.6
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Nice poem, but this website is for minecraft, not cat poems.
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03/03/2014 4:11 pm
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bigf
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Recently they changed up the rules so blogs unrelated to Minecraft were allowed.
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03/02/2014 3:34 pm
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Crafty123white_
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Best poem for today, my families 2 kittens turned 1 year old today! :D They are a mix of Birman and Persian. :)
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03/02/2014 12:44 pm
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PixelCrash_
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Nice poem. I strongly encourage you to write more. Here's a diamond.
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03/02/2014 12:36 am
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Izzy10471
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This is really cute, I love cats ^o^ I have 4 myself, but for future referance, make the poem rhyme and it could sound alot better ;)
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03/01/2014 11:30 pm
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BuhBuckyBoe
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If you make your poems rhyme, some people might like it more because it will flow better in their head. Good job on getting on the pop-reel.
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03/01/2014 9:33 pm
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deltoraquestgirl
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Hooray for kittypets!
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03/01/2014 8:41 pm
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VladimirVolchenkov
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This poem is not bad, try to make some more. 

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