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[Poem] The beautiful moment

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wldscarlet's Avatar wldscarlet
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Hello Fellow PMC'ers,

I saw many rants and arguments on our community. I felt bad when I saw them and I want you to be more patient. This is a present for you. There are many things hide inside of these following poems. I hope you will find many secret words that I want to tell you. And please diamond this blog if you like my poems. ^_^


My poem... for you. :)

You and me

You say hello to me, I will say hello to you.
You never call me, I will never know you.
You don't have to be afraid of me when I want to see you.
You don't know I want to talk with you.
You give me your heart and everything from you.
You will get all of me too and I will place inside of you.
You came to me with all of your smiles and I will see you.
And I will like you then.
(And you will be noticed then.)

Minecraft block

Each block has 6 sides and each side has it own mind.
Like it such many kinds of people.
And they also face each others.
But they never swear any word.

Each block can live with other blocks
Every blocks such as a community.
That community is strong and beautiful as if a castle.
And the cycle of seasons... spring, summer, autumn and winter just proves its integrity.

-ScarletBox
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04/25/2013 3:46 pm
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stevesj123
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amazing work

love it!!!!!
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11/17/2012 3:47 am
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Jyles
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awesome! :D
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11/03/2012 2:40 am
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TurtleLover
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tis beautiful :)
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11/03/2012 12:40 am
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Ravenpaw2000
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Amazing work :) I gave it a diamond because I like poetry and you are very good at it :) I hope that you make more of these and stay original! :D also I have it a favorite ( heart hint hint) because I understood the meaning of them :)
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11/02/2012 11:40 pm
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Beast
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Amazing Poem, Scarlet, really well written. The only thing is that there doesn't seem to be a meter I could find.
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11/02/2012 11:28 pm
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Pocahontas1
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Brought a tear to my eye :')
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11/02/2012 2:34 pm
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Roobus
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Thank you for sharing these.
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11/02/2012 1:10 pm
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Turtleshell_Luck
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Obvious deeper meanings in them and indirect/direct themes are good, but I had a terribly hard time discovering any meter in them. Neither of them seem to have any iambic or trochaic meter, they are flimsy, and the stresses and unstresses come in patterns i can't recognize?

Am I wrong and just did not find the right meter? Or is there a problem with them?
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11/02/2012 8:12 pm
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wldscarlet
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Oh, there are problem about meter in them... sorry. xD
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11/02/2012 11:07 am
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minecraftworkers
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why you are so awsome?
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