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A snowy soul (?) (No hate please) Prolouge through Chapter 9

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Ashfur4ever avatar Ashfur4ever
Level 32 : Artisan uwu

The snow pierced into my soul. I curled into a tiny ball and shivered. How could Quinn strand me? I pulled my sweatshirt close around me, wishing it was something warmer. We were just talking, when I realized we had walked into the woods. I had turned around to go home, but the snow swirled around me as if in a trance. Quinn had smirked and had pushed me into the soft, cold snow. He took my jacket with him as he left me.

“Quinn!” I had shouted at the snow, he was already gone.

                I sobbed, but stopped when I had to brush away frozen tears. What to do now? I got up and stumbled around, blacking out to the void of nothing.

 I do not own picture found on bing immages*

please no hate. If you dont like it. Leave it. If you like it. Tell me please! ^.^ have a nice day!!

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Chapter 9 : by Ashfur4ever 09/02/2014 6:25:17 pmSep 2nd, 2014

Chapter 9


“AHHHH!” Ethan screamed as he plunged into freezing water. He turned to Haru, soaking and furious, “Why. Did. You. Walk. Through. The. Bush?!” Haru had walked through the bush, knowing full well that there was the river behind it.

“I’m sorry! It’s like a dolphin thing or something…” Haru trailed off as Ethan glared at him.

“A dolphin thing.” A voice spoke from the trees. Ethan looked at Haru.

“Was that you?”

“Ummm no!” Haru replied, a little alarmed.


“Haru!” Ethan looked really freaked out by now. Haru slowly turned, searching for the source of the voice. The voice found him.

“Ugg. You guys are gonna get your selves killed if you’re really that stupid. I’m up here” Both Haru and Ethan snapped their heads toward the canopy. A teenager about Haru’s age leapt down; she had spikey black hair and yellow eyes, like a snake’s. Her apparel consisted of mostly black and she had a Goth look to her. She landed gracefully next to Ethan. Ethan didn’t look happy about that.

“I’m Athanasia. I believe that those morons that call themselves “The L.A.B” are trying to get you killed.” She hesitated for a second. “But I don’t think it’s worth it. I’ll let you live. And I’ll go with you. I’m The Snake.”

“Wait… what?” Haru could almost feel the information trying to squish itself into his brain.

“Arg! You guys are all the same! Let’s just go….where were you headed to?” she briskly asked.

“Um. We were going to find my cousin Connor.” Haru awkwardly answered. He was observing her, seeing her pale skin, not so full lips, rather flat image.

She raised her dark eyebrows. “You mean the wolf kid? The one that, like, escaped with the leopard girl and he owl? And stop looking at me like that.” She bared her teeth and Haru jumped back. She had pointy teeth!

“Umm, what do you mean wolf kid? He has short, light brown hair, light blue eyes and freckles. Is that the ‘wolf kid’” Haru asked. He knew Connor had always loved wolfs but how did Athanasia know that and where did she… oh no… “You- Connor- L.A.B- oh no!” He gasped “Connor got trapped in the L.A.B didn’t he?!”

“I do believe you just described the wolf boy” Athanasia answered lazily. “And you put the pieces together. Is that one a moron, too?” She looked at both of them, who were each equally confused.

“Um. Do you mean me?” Ethan inquired.

“That would be a yes.” Athanasia said. She squinted at the sky, and added, “This way will take you to Connor.”

“How do you know? Inquired Ethan. Looking a little freaked out by the new girl.

“I watched Connor escape with two others. He traveled south. The sun is there.” She pointed at the sun, a little to their left. “And it is after noon. The sun sets in the west. So the sun is west. Use that to find south.”

Ethan and Haru’s heads were spinning, and only Haru understood what she was saying.

“Ok…well let’s go that then…” Haru looked a little stunned still. Who was she? I guess we’ll find out when she turns on us.

And with that, the group marched south, towards Connor.

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09/18/2014 8:51 am
Level 51 : Grandmaster Dragon
samkee00 avatar
Sorry, I know this is old, but I had to comment.
"If you don't like it, leave it" is the WORST possible policy a budding writer could have. What you SHOULD do is ask for constructive criticism. That way people can help you make it better if there is something to fix!
09/18/2014 3:52 pm
Level 32 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever avatar
aahh, your very right! This is old, sorry i think ill fix this, you are correct in all ways, i believe i ment that i didnt want hate as in "This is dumb" "Or i hate this" things that dont help. Thanks for seeing that an dfor the help!
09/18/2014 10:50 pm
Level 51 : Grandmaster Dragon
samkee00 avatar
I understand. I just saw that the way you put it is sort of off-putting to people who want to help! Also, I know this is sort of um... Grammar Nazi-ish, but 


sorry I always do that
09/19/2014 7:19 am
Level 32 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever avatar
Its okay, autocorrect is my bestie ;)
so when the pmc comments don't have it.... welp you see what happens.
09/12/2014 7:59 am
Level 1 : New Explorer
CreeperPoodle avatar
Looks good. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
09/12/2014 7:29 pm
Level 32 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever avatar
Thanks... i dont know if i'll be continueing this though...
07/25/2014 12:08 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Crafter
ldenning6 avatar
Guess what? *hate* muahahaha there is nothing you can do now
09/02/2014 6:26 pm
Level 32 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever avatar
D: nuuuuuu
07/12/2014 7:33 pm
Level 38 : Artisan Creeper
CreeperSoul23 avatar
Nice story so year :)
07/12/2014 7:42 pm
Level 32 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever avatar
thank you! :D
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