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"Suddenly Steve felt a haphazard surge of pain in his back and in an instant darkness encompassed him."
I'd change it to:
"Suddenly, Steve felt a haphazard surge of pain in his back, and in an instant darkness encompassed him."
wow
Good Luck, Mine is terrible...