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Something Lost - "Life of a Snow Golem" Contest

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Something Lost - Text Version
Gentle snow did grace the ground
As the golem searched all around

Frantic and stumbling was he
And it was quite a funny sight to see

Under trees and rocks
Through Steve's dresser and his socks

It seemed to be neither here nor there
He couldn't find it anywhere

Without it, he felt exposed
Maybe he could borrow Steve's clothes?

As the sun began to set
More and more did the golem fret

Darkness fell upon the snow
Surely now he'd never know

Where had he lost it at?
Stolen by his neighbor's cat?

Tumbled down some darkened caves?
Washed away by the ocean waves?

Defeated, hopeless, and out of steam
He sat beside a mumuring stream

Just as he felt he was out of time
Something orange that doesn't rhyme

Floated by
And caught his eye

Where he'd lost it he never knew
But he sure was glad it floated through

Plucked it from the babbling brook
And off the water shook

Atop he placed it
His pumpkin head, a perfect fit

As the sun rose once more
He knew it certain, sure

Even though he searched all day, he could not complain
He sure was glad to have a head again.


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Howwwwwwwwww also congratz!!!!! I love how when you type a comment and your profile pic bobs so I'm going to keep typing for a while lol dont judge me :3 yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Yep. Congrats.
  • nezoGG
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  • Artisan Network
  • January 24, 2017, 2:20 am
I like this poem so much ! Keep up the good work :D
  • fnxfc
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  • Apprentice Network
  • January 23, 2017, 5:17 pm
Congratulations on winning the contest! Your poem is very well written, I enjoyed it very much! :)
Congrats
  • Zatharel
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  • January 22, 2017, 8:48 pm
Congratulations c:
  • Seivelath
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  • Expert Network
  • January 22, 2017, 7:15 pm
Congratulations on the win Azie, well deserved :)
  • abeille
  • Level 28
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  • January 22, 2017, 4:10 pm
Congratulations Azie! :D
  • Azie
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  • January 22, 2017, 4:20 pm
Thanks so much! :D
  • abeille
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  • January 23, 2017, 3:44 am
Your welcome! And very smart to remove that comment! I noticed they seemed to have a reputation to say horrible things like that, well there is always going to be those people out there! Anyways, yes, Your very Welcome!
  • Wyvern
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  • Artisan Dragon
  • December 23, 2016, 6:27 am
The custom text is always a +1 in my book, nice one (:
  • Lojend
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  • January 23, 2017, 11:03 am
Do you judge on how the poem looks, like the little pictures and the font?
We judge based on how well the poem is written, the ideas behind the blog, and the overall structure and grammar.
  • Wyvern
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  • Artisan Dragon
  • January 23, 2017, 1:41 pm
we judge based on a few factors, one of them being the presentation, and here the presentation is good
  • Lojend
  • Level 17
  • Journeyman Scribe
  • January 23, 2017, 3:57 pm
Oh, I wasn't sure what structure meant, I thought it was used in a more literary manner. Thank you!
Good luck in the contest m8!
  • Havingfun_ISKEY
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  • December 21, 2016, 5:37 am
Beautiful and clever. I'm glad to see one of your blogs again. Good luck in the contest.
  • Azie
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  • December 21, 2016, 6:42 am
Thanks! I wasn't gonna enter this one, but heck, why not. Lol
  • Havingfun_ISKEY
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  • December 21, 2016, 7:27 am
Indeed :P

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