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This is my first minecraft animation i created please give me some feedback on how to improve :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZUTg7CVDJU
(first animation created with mine-imator)
Steve tackles the task of eliminating the mobs which stalk his house #stevetherebel
Voltic Bear
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Steve starts his day off as usual, fearing the night time ahead. He then finds a sword and decides to put it to use. He fights off a spider a zombie and a creeper .
The second animation i maed is here aha mau aswell pick out the bad bits from that too? ahahahah
Just going to add the third animation here aswell hope you like it :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwiQW6AzoLY
(first animation created with mine-imator)
Steve tackles the task of eliminating the mobs which stalk his house #stevetherebel
Voltic Bear
__
__/~~\-''- _ |
__- - { \
/ \
/ ;o o }
| ;
'
\_ (..)
''-_ _ _ /
/
/
Steve starts his day off as usual, fearing the night time ahead. He then finds a sword and decides to put it to use. He fights off a spider a zombie and a creeper .
The second animation i maed is here aha mau aswell pick out the bad bits from that too? ahahahah
Just going to add the third animation here aswell hope you like it :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwiQW6AzoLY
1 Update Logs
Update #1 : by Ace_Box 04/19/2014 7:05:25 amApril 19, 2014 @ 11:05 am UTC
added second and third animation to the project
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(ignore the jerks that say it sucks)
2. He was phasing through the floor a lot.
3. Okay sound effects.
4. The equiping animation needs work, a lot of work.
5. He phased through the roof of the door.
6. The outside needs some more stuff. At LEAST have some trees and grass, which Mineimator adds.
7. He flew, not jumped.
8. The attacking animation needs work too
8, When something is decapitated more than the head moves, the full body is pushed down.
9. It takes more than one swift pull to remove an object from a head
10. When something is hit it would lurch a bit, not fall to pieces, that is more of a dying thing.
11. When a sword is thrown it will spin, not go like a bullet.
12. The waving animation is horrid, it's like it is stuck on repeat, the hand goes back and forth, not glitches.
Overall 2/10, yes, you are new but practice more on short animations
Diamond and sub Keep up the great work