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"Effort-19" - A Changed Story

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::| DISCLAIMER |::

I get that Changed is a pretty not so ok game, but don't worry, I won't include any inappropriate descriptions. Don't worry mods, I'll keep it kid-friendly lol
Assimilations MAY happen in the story, I don't know, we'll see as I write it

Also I'm a bad drawer

::| ABOUT |::

This story takes place in one of my RP's universes
Differences from the original Changed should be expected

::| Story Description |::

2 Hyenas, Duke and Stephanie. Both of which are one of the many cubs to Shira, the leader of the pack.

The Hyena pack is large, without about 15-16 members, most of which are Shira's cubs.
They're quite territorial and keep the Greenhouse section of the facility as their territory.

Duke and Charlotte spend much of their time together doing chores or just entertaining each other.
As they finish up their chores, they realize that some of their siblings weren't doing there's. Not having much thought, they continue.
Sooner than later, they start to notice that they both haven't seen some of their brothers and sisters in a while. This begins to worry them.
Investigating, they discover the cause of the disappearances to be much more dangerous than they'd anticipate.

=================================The Actual Story==============================================

Chapter 1: "Introductions"

Duke: 'Ugh... When will they for once clean after themselves!"

Duke. A 15-year-old Hyena cub to Shira. He was average in about everything. He always kept his hair in a huge mess, it being often called a birds next of course. He'd have faded amber eyes; he would also be in a tired expression, covering quite a bit of his eyes. His fur was always quite a mess too, not being cut in years and really fluffy, often poofing out when he was scared. Lots of fur, means lots of shedding as well.
Duke would be carrying a large tray filled with used containers and plates. The weight of it was making Duke regret getting out of bed early to get his chores done. But Charlotte just stared, giving him an annoyed look.

Stephanie: "Welp, I told you!"

Duke: "When?!"

Stephanie: "When you got up?... At 6 in the morning?!"

Duke: "I didn't hear you say anything!"

Stephanie: "Oh now you're just lying"

Stephanie. a 14-year-old tall standing Hyena cub to Shira, who was quite quiet most of the time, even to her siblings, thought saying she was shy wouldn't be correct. On the other hand she was quite neat, tidying things up when she could. She'd have bright blue eyes and always smile near new people. She'd have long white hair that was quite unruly.
She would growl lowly. Her face showing just how upset she was. Duke didn't care, he just hauled everything away, smirking.

Stephanie: "Why does he act like this sometimes. He doesn't near others?.. Meh.. He's trying to be a pest"

Down the stairs into the cafeteria a smaller Hyena would bounce down

Dillan: "Hi, Charlotte!"

Stephanie: "Hey.. What do you need?"

Dillan; a 11-year-old Hyena cub to Shira, with blue eyes and a sweet personality. He's usually quite calm at times, but he can get energetic here and there. He'd have a small white tuft of hair, dyed at the end teal as his hairstyle. He'd be shorter then most for obvious reasons but usually get along with the older kids. He lies to play rough, usually tumbling into others to get them to play with him.

Dillan: "Nothing! Just saying hi!"

Stephanie: "Ok then?.. Oh, actually. Do you know why Duke's been acting so weird lately?"

Dillan: "He seems fine to me!"

Stephanie: "Of course he does"

She'd frown. Feeling kind of stupid for not expecting this answer
Just then, the sliding door into the cafeteria opened, Duke walking back in

Duke: "Oh, hey Dil"

Dillan: "Hi, Duck- Err... Duke! Duke, Duke!"

Duke would facepalm and sigh

Duke: "I'M NOT DUCK!!"

Dillan would giggle, even though it was an accident that he said duck, he found Duke's reaction funny.

Duke: "IT'S NOT FUNNY!"

Stephanie would just observe.

Dillan: "Hehe- Yea it is!"

Stephanie: "Calm down, Duke"

Duke: "Hmph... Let's just go!" He'd cross his arms.

Dillan: "Can I tag along!"

Stephanie: "Err... You ok with that?" She'd say as she faced in Duke's direction

Duke: "Uh... Well.. You see..."

Stephanie would stare at Duke, giving a disappointed look

Stephanie: "Not this time Dil. His freak out like that, is a obvious sign that he wants to do something with me"

Duke: "Heeeeyyy!!"

Stephanie would glare at Duke, knowing it was true. Duke would look away in response..

Dillan: "Oh! Okie! I'll let you guys do you're thing! I was planning to go pick flowers anyway"

Duke: "When were you into flo-"

Stephanie: "-That sounds nice, Dill"

Duke would grumpily walk over to the sliding door exiting the cafeteria, and wait for Stephanie.

Stephanie: "Alright, bye, Dill"

Dillan: "Bye, Stephanie!"

Stephanie would walk over to the sliding door as well.

Stephanie: "Well?"

Duke: "I found something I wanted to show JUST you, alright?"

Stephanie: "Mhm?"

Duke: "Aaaand.. Sorry I was mean to Dillan..."

Stephanie: "Alright, now we can go."

They'd both leave the cafeteria

---Chapter 2 In the Works---
CreditDragonSnow - Creator of Changed
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|| Front Page?? || : by SpartanHarv 08/14/2023 9:35:13 amAug 14th, 2023

How.
How the heck.
A day after I published this it gets front page??

Well that's cool!

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