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The Stronghold of the Talking Wall (Short Contest Entry)

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Special thanks to Lola_ for the thumbnail. Blog created for a contest that probably no longer exists (Gen Moustache's story contest), still recommend reading though. A bit short for my own style, but still.
Updated January 2nd 2015, no further updates likely.

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  • jeenveev
  • Level 28
  • Expert Botanist
  • January 31, 2015, 9:02 pm
Woot woot congrats on 2nd c:
YAY ZATH LEVEL 22
Btw, best Jukebox ever yet. (though Rick Astley IS competition)
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 22, 2014, 10:25 pm
jukebox OP m8
  • PukedOutKiwi
  • Level 17
  • Journeyman Scribe
  • November 21, 2014, 9:58 pm
What contest is this for exactly?
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 21, 2014, 11:50 pm
Gen's blogging contest
  • Meepedy
  • Level 32
  • Artisan Engineer
  • November 21, 2014, 9:11 pm
just the Pink Floyd song at the end was enough for me to give a diamond :p
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 21, 2014, 11:50 pm
XD
  • Rush_Official
  • Level 34
  • Artisan Blockhead
  • November 21, 2014, 2:21 pm
notice the creeper face noice :B
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 21, 2014, 9:01 pm
:p
  • Ninja Yeti
  • Level 11
  • Journeyman Architect
  • November 21, 2014, 1:25 am
OMG!  Pink Floyd! you rock!!!
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 21, 2014, 2:54 am
yeah, let's just say my dad has a huge influence on my music taste :p
  • Ninja Yeti
  • Level 11
  • Journeyman Architect
  • November 21, 2014, 5:24 am
I wish i could say different. ;)
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 21, 2014, 9:00 am
I have about 500 discs and like 100 vinyl records in my living room. That's all the music I knew from age 3 to age 10 :p
The majority of those are mom's, though dad is a much much bigger music fan. Anyway, to this day he sings random songs he thinks of and I have yet to have listened to all of them XD
Pink Floyd is his favorite band, and while my own favorite is Black Sabbath, Pink Floyd is another band that's close to my own taste.
  • Ninja Yeti
  • Level 11
  • Journeyman Architect
  • November 21, 2014, 9:24 am
My mom says if your children listen to to Pink Floyd your a good parent, ironicly I like them more than her XD . I love old rock and Pink Floyd is also one of my favorite bands but resently I've been listening to alot of Green Day.
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 21, 2014, 9:02 pm
Green day is alright, although it's more from my mom's side, I like the band.
amazing!!! I love the form of the writting!
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 20, 2014, 8:24 pm
Thanks =)
no problem! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ ✧゚・: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)
If I was going to be picky it should probably be "purple skinned" instead of "purple skin" but wow!
The only reason I noticed that is because I read that part again trying to imagine the monster.

I like how you make references to the characters and let the reader imagine them.

thanks for sharing!
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 19, 2014, 8:32 pm
damn I didn't see that. Thanks for the feedback.
  • Casamify
  • Level 48
  • Master Batman
  • November 19, 2014, 11:10 am
i like this! good job!
Nice story.
+1 Dia
  • Fighterbear12
  • Level 51
  • Grandmaster Musician
  • November 19, 2014, 8:24 am
Good short story!
  • WTFshady
  • Level 31
  • Artisan Dragonborn
  • November 19, 2014, 7:38 am
Pretty good. Great job.
  • Zatharel
  • Level 44
  • Master Sweetheart
  • November 19, 2014, 7:41 am
Thanks mate.

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