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The Unexpected Visitors (Mystery In the Mansion) (Entry)

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What you're about to be told is as real as you and me. It all started on a windy day, we were walking on the trails to our house after returning from farming in our farm. It began to get dark as we walk in the night the moon lay there shining bright and round. We follow the path that takes us to our house we began going on another path and we got lost we were scared I felt we weren't going to make it.

My heart was beating as fast as it could, we heard odd noises and the treetops started to cover the moonlight, we pulled out a torch and it was then bright but us alone in the dark we were terrified we had no patience of waiting for someone to find us, it was getting out of here or we die, we began running more and I tripped. Isabella helped me up as we look up there lay a Mansion tall and bright.

We start to head over to the Mansion for protection. Us being young we didn't think of what could possibly be in there, the front door was unlocked so we walked in there, The fireplace was lit torches were lit. We searched room by room, no one was there, we go to check the last room and we hear glass break. we both kept our mouths shut in fear, All of the windows in the house broke, we try to find a place to hide.

Isabella and I ran into an unlocked door dark and gloomy inside, after we run it we locked it and stayed quiet. After a few minutes, we calm down but still in fear.. [Isabella]" Ivan what broke that glass?!?.." [Ivan] "I have no idea but it wasn't the wind.." suddenly we hear footsteps on the stairs which is above where we went. We had gone into a closet underneath the stairs, Isabella started crying I turn to what appears to be her but wasn't. I turn and then try to give a hug, I scream as loud as I can it wasn't Isabella. Someone was in here with us, I yelled to Isabella "RUNNNNN!!!!!!!" we both head towards the door and I'm the only one who comes out. I run back in and check but no one was there, I run as fast as I can to find her I search every room.
As I was running towards the closet once more I fall through a floor into what looked like a basement I fell and I got up while my legs and my head were in pain. I felt as if I was stabbed with an Iron Sword or shot with a Bow, I get up and I see someone tied up by a staircase [Isabella] "Hmmmmmm?!!! [Ivan] "Isabella?!!" I feel as if she didn't see me I walked up to her and tried waving my hand but no eye contact nor a reaction to it.

Suddenly she tries to get out a Man hit her with a sheld a couple of times and then went back to making potions. She was crying like never before. I sit there watching... I realize that I'm just a ghost watching over her. Suddenly I wake up in the closet with her next to me we run out as quickly as possible. The Mansion went on fire as soon as we left.
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