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So Hi! I decided to enter the Herobrine blog Contest. This is more of a story rather than a sightings record. Also it may have typos because it's a journal. Please Diamond/Favorite/Subscribe if you like.
Warning, it may be sort of creepy to younger viewers so take caution.
Warning, it may be sort of creepy to younger viewers so take caution.
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What you generally want to do with flashbacks is start and stop them with a slight progression from start to stop in the present. Ergo, "it was a rainy day.... *flashback* the rain grew heavier". Very blunt example, but you should get what I'm saying. Starting and stopping at the same present point in time is very jarring for the reader. Good story overall, though, I like the Brine tribal concept.