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Those Eyes (Poem)

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avatar gab51299
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Meme
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In the forest, filled with night..

my body is scarred,and bloodied with fright.

Since there is nowhere, nowhere to hide,

So I'll just face it, face it and fight.


Death was near, and so were they.

And I just thought, that this was a game.

All I had, was a big shiny blade.

And it had a name, the someone to blame.


The blade was red, and partly blue.

The one chasing me, was someone I knew.

I ran towards him, and so did he.

His grin so wide, so filled with glee.


I lie in the sand, and he stands strong.

And so I noticed, something was wrong.

His face was mine, and mine's was his.

But his eyes glowed, in so deep bliss.




This is my first attempt at making a poem, I started this in school where we had to make a poem, and now this is the first part of it.This is a WIP.
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08/06/2012 3:22 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Architect
GunmanBear
That's not a poem That's a rap xD
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08/06/2012 3:24 am
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Meme
gab51299
It's a poem to me. :P
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08/06/2012 3:26 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Architect
GunmanBear
ok :B
when comes my skin`?
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08/06/2012 3:35 am
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Meme
gab51299
Hmm, do you mind that I be the one to shade it, while you do the other stuff? Cuz That way you get it to look how you want and I get to make it better by shading it.
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08/06/2012 3:46 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Architect
GunmanBear
i just want to ask :((
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08/06/2012 2:04 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Engineer
BloodFall
What a nice poem!
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08/06/2012 1:53 am
Level 1 : New Explorer
Green_Ninjaxxx
its a good poem but this is planet minecraft not planet poems
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08/06/2012 2:01 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Engineer
BloodFall
ORLY? This isn't Planet Ponies or Planet Sketches either. And moderators comment on those.
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08/06/2012 8:05 am
Level 65 : High Grandmaster Slime Tamer
M1CKY
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This.
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08/06/2012 4:33 am
Level 1 : New Miner
RaeSolo
ITS A BLOG POST! :D
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08/06/2012 1:38 am
Level 6 : Apprentice Architect
sons00123
cool dude let me guess herobrine ?
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08/06/2012 3:22 am
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Meme
gab51299
Yep.
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