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Twinkle Twinkle 
Written by cailanrocks
(Sorry about the formatting!)
Warning! This story contains mature content aimed towards readers at or over the age of 13! It is not for the feint hearted! Read at your own risk! I am NOT responsible for any readers with any paranoia or nightmares.
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Boo! The end.

Chapter 1:

Just another boring day. Mrs. Nettens watering her garden full of a vast species of flowers, Mr. Nettens mowing the lawn and their dog chewing on his gargantuan bone? Yep. That dog's bone is just huge. "Mom! Mom!! Are we going to go?" anxiously yelled Carson, nearly tumbling down the stairs as he dashed down them. "Yes, sweetie! Dad is just... Fine-tuning the car!" replied his mom, while her husband worked on the car. "In the mean time, you can sneak in a couple minutes of soccer!" Patricia said, tickling Carson. Ugh. When will we leave? Carson just couldn't get it out of his mind, when suddenly his dad called him and this time, it was so they could depart. "Finally! I thought we'd never leave!" yelled Carson in joy.

Chapter 2:
It couldn't be worse

They pulled out of their driveway and sharply turned right. They saw their last traffic light they'd see until they arrived. They pulled onto an Unnamed highway and drove for a couple of miles, then turned onto a rural road. They drove for 7 hours until the sun fell out of the sky, faster than they could get to the hotel. After it turned to day, they were already driving. Everything was normal. Then, the car swerved off the road, flying into a ditch, launching Carson out of the car, as it rolled up the ditch onto railroad tracks, Patricia's head torn open with a wound right into her brain, and his dad killed by a glass shard piercing his throat. The car exploded after Carson was ejected from the skyroof. He was out cold. And those tracks were used commonly by the trains. 

Chapter 3:

About an hour after the initial crash, someone working on the railroad tracks noticed the crashed car. He ran as fast as he could to Carson, realizing he was alive. The worker ran back to his truck. "A-are you o-o-okay?" he yelled as he ran back. A horn sounded in the distance. A couple of minutes later, a train was a mere mile away, when the conductor realized the car on the tracks. He pulled the Dynamic, Emergency and Air brakes in hopes of stopping in time, but it was too late… the train already arrived at the car, which got wedged between two trees and the train. The car got compacted so much that a spark lit in the nearly empty gas tank; filled with vapour. The car exploded and the train derailed, knocking down the trees. Carson was super lucky that a boxcar that was flung at him was cut open by e explosion. The train exploded, while Carson was safe under the boxcar. 

Chapter 4:

Carson was found after 12 hours when CSX realized their train didn't make it. He was airlifted to a hospital in Chicago, even though they left from Ohio. "And we've got breaking news in tonight. A family of three has been reported dead. Wait, this is just coming in. We have one survivor, and Four dead from this tragic crash. Stay tuned to channel 6 for more as we get new intelligence coming in." Carson was in his coma for six months, when he started waking up. He saw this program on the news. "6 Months ago, Four died in a crash on a rural road. Investigators are now treating this as a murder. Carson will be interviewed later. Catherine Rosé, signing out. Have a good night." Carson was seeing stuff. And he was seeing it bad, when suddenly, a vision appeared out of no where with his dad's face saying 'I'm coming Carson!'. Carson had a heart attack from all the visions. "CODE RED! CODE RED! HEART ATTACK IN ROOM 4! THIS IS NOT A TEST!" was repeated over the intercoms as employees rushed in… but they were too late. He is gone.

Chapter 5:

"Good day! This is. Catherine Rosé, now with this case for 9 months! Investigators have found the car was rigged to swerve in exactly 10 hours, most likely right before departure."  Carson was long gone. However, his soul was bloodthirsty. He was out for blood. He slipped into Lisa McGibbons house and played with her overnight. And he was going to do every house, and buisness as long as he wasn't eradicated. But he was being sucked into anyone he killed... And he was now Lisa McGibbons! 

Chapter 6:

Carson woke up in the hospital. He was in the ICU and was going through an MRI when he woke up. He got up when he got out of the machine and pulled a pair of car keys off the desk and drove away. But, he only put it into Reverse and it went flying backwards into a propane tank and he died for good.


The End (Sorta messed up the story)

Did you know: This is being updated as you read!


2 Update Logs

Day 2 : 07/18/2015 9:55:24 amJul 18th, 2015

Added chapter 5!
Its really suspended here :p

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  • Orbiter
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  • Master Fox
  • July 18, 2015, 7:22 am
How is this report?? :/
  • cailanrocks
  • Level 11
  • Journeyman Toast
  • July 18, 2015, 1:19 pm
Report? It's a story.
  • Orbiter
  • Level 42
  • Master Fox
  • July 18, 2015, 2:07 pm
Someone reported it, but the flag's gone now :D
  • cailanrocks
  • Level 11
  • Journeyman Toast
  • July 18, 2015, 3:18 pm
Oh. Thank you for telling me. I haven't received any PMs from a mod
  • Orbiter
  • Level 42
  • Master Fox
  • July 18, 2015, 3:20 pm
hehe, of course! Keep up the story telling! :D
  • cailanrocks
  • Level 11
  • Journeyman Toast
  • July 18, 2015, 3:38 pm
Will do!
  • WhoIsThis
  • Level 1
  • New Network
  • July 17, 2015, 10:01 pm
Gripping and suspenseful so far.. let's see how it goes!

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