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Before the story: This is going to be an actual book that I will write and publish, sooner or later :P please let me know what you like, or if u have any suggestions. diamonds if u like it and favs if u love it xD thx!!
(Just so u know, Im not that good at introductions or afterstories.)
P.S. The actual book name will be Teeth & Claws.
PROLOGE:
Standing up from pulling weeds out of his mother's carrot garden, Neil Barsky looked up at the Ohio country sky and smiled. Neil was a teenage boy, 17 years of age. His black, straight hair was gleaming in the sun above. His light blue eyes gleamed as he took in the sights of the brightly colored trees. Wrapped around his forehead, is a gray rag, wet with sweat. He was thin and slender, yet he was not lanky. He was quite tall; 6 foot to be exact. He was the tallest, and hardest working in his family. Neil was born in northern Georgia, but moved to Ohio for his father's business. His father ran an industry which specializes in making farm tools. He had many friends in his small school, but his personal favorite was Derek Hickory. Derek lived a couple miles down the road from Neil's busy household. They frequently met with each other whenever they could. They're friendship was forever-lasting. Neil's mother was a busy woman. She was always cleaning or repairing something. If the house's door was squeaking when opened, she oiled it. If Neil gave even the slightest hint that he was hungry, she was there with a hot bowl of soup. She was always moving.
Neil put his hand over his eyes while looking at the sky and said to himself, "It's getting to be dusk. I'd better get inside." He put his gloves into the workshop and opened his front door. "Mom, what's for dinner?" he asked putting his hat onto the rack. "Chicken and biscuits." She replied back. Neil walked up to his room and sat on his bed. He picked up the wolf figurine laying on his side-table and looked at it. Neil loved wolves. He admired them as a species. He wanted to know all about them. he put the figurine down, and walked over to his window. Outside, was Derek, waving his arms and motioning for Neil to come outside. Neil ran downstairs and ran out of the door. Derek was in the front of Neil's house waiting. "Dude! Do you know that girl Stephanie?" Derek excitedly asked. Neil nodded and was guessing what got Derek so happy. "I found out today that she likes me!" Derek exclaimed. Neil smiled and said, "That's great Derek! I have some news too!" "What is it?" Derek asked. "I saw a real live wolf in the woods behind our house! A wolf!" Neil said happily. Derek laughed and said, "What's up with you and wolves? They're just wild dogs!" Neil was slightly offended by the statement, but knew that his friend meant no harm. "You wouldn't understand." He said smiling. "Dinner's ready Neil!" Neil's mother yelled out of the window. Neil said bye to his friend and went inside to eat dinner. After dinner, Neil took a quick bath, then went into his room once it was dark outside. he lied down into his bed and shut his eyes, waiting for another day.
Shur'Tal
Neil woke with a start. He jumped out of his bed at the sound of a howl. He looked out of his window and into the sky. He saw nothing but a dark night sky and a full moon. He thought nothing of the full moon at the time. He shut his window and walked back to his bed, only to hear another howl. Neil thought to himself, That was not a wolf's howl. It was too deep and drawn-out. He quickly put on his clothes, rag, and shoes, and slowly and silently snuck out of the house. He had gotten out of the house, when suddenly, he heard a loud growl and another howl. He jumped and walked slowly toward the woods. he was getting closer to the howl once he reached the first few trees. He moved in slow calm motions, careful not to disturb whatever was making the howls. He couldn't stop thinking about worse case scenarios of what it could be. It could be a werewolf, or something else, or a murderer attracting curious people with howls. Neil thought at one point. He walked and walked for what seemed like hours until he saw a huge black creature standing there on it's hind legs howling. This was what was making the howling. Neil quickly hid behind a tree and peeked over his shoulder to get a look at it. He couldn't see it clearly so he tried to lean closer and squint his eyes, but stepped on a twig in the process. The beast swerved around at godly speed and growled. It had Illuminating yellow eyes and blood caked snout. Once the beast saw Neil's full form, it seemed to be afraid for a few seconds. It regained it ferocious look and snorted at Neil. Neil could only watch in shock. He could tell by the form or the creature, and the yellow eyes, that it was, in fact, a werewolf. neil could not even think about what to do next. Neil could barely think at all. The beast finally made the first move. it dashed towards Neil, baring it's fangs, and bit him on the forearm. neil could not move fast enough, and screamed in pain. He clenched his arm and could only think of one option. Run! He turned around and sprinted away from the beast as fast as he could run. Strangely, he did not run out of breath. He was perfectly fine. He soon noticed that he was running at inhuman speeds. He yelped and hid behind the closest tree. he looked over each shoulder and saw that the werewolf was gone. It had stopped chasing him. Neil sighed and sat down next to the tree. He looked at his arm and rolled up his sleeves to reveal his clean, smooth forearm. How had his wound healed so fast? He gasped and, seemingly instinctively, looked up at the bright moon and howled. He covered his mouth with his hands. he looked around desperately and dashed home. he had become a werewolf.
This has been the prologue, and the first part of chapter 1. let me know what you think in the comments!
(Just so u know, Im not that good at introductions or afterstories.)
P.S. The actual book name will be Teeth & Claws.
PROLOGE:
Standing up from pulling weeds out of his mother's carrot garden, Neil Barsky looked up at the Ohio country sky and smiled. Neil was a teenage boy, 17 years of age. His black, straight hair was gleaming in the sun above. His light blue eyes gleamed as he took in the sights of the brightly colored trees. Wrapped around his forehead, is a gray rag, wet with sweat. He was thin and slender, yet he was not lanky. He was quite tall; 6 foot to be exact. He was the tallest, and hardest working in his family. Neil was born in northern Georgia, but moved to Ohio for his father's business. His father ran an industry which specializes in making farm tools. He had many friends in his small school, but his personal favorite was Derek Hickory. Derek lived a couple miles down the road from Neil's busy household. They frequently met with each other whenever they could. They're friendship was forever-lasting. Neil's mother was a busy woman. She was always cleaning or repairing something. If the house's door was squeaking when opened, she oiled it. If Neil gave even the slightest hint that he was hungry, she was there with a hot bowl of soup. She was always moving.
Neil put his hand over his eyes while looking at the sky and said to himself, "It's getting to be dusk. I'd better get inside." He put his gloves into the workshop and opened his front door. "Mom, what's for dinner?" he asked putting his hat onto the rack. "Chicken and biscuits." She replied back. Neil walked up to his room and sat on his bed. He picked up the wolf figurine laying on his side-table and looked at it. Neil loved wolves. He admired them as a species. He wanted to know all about them. he put the figurine down, and walked over to his window. Outside, was Derek, waving his arms and motioning for Neil to come outside. Neil ran downstairs and ran out of the door. Derek was in the front of Neil's house waiting. "Dude! Do you know that girl Stephanie?" Derek excitedly asked. Neil nodded and was guessing what got Derek so happy. "I found out today that she likes me!" Derek exclaimed. Neil smiled and said, "That's great Derek! I have some news too!" "What is it?" Derek asked. "I saw a real live wolf in the woods behind our house! A wolf!" Neil said happily. Derek laughed and said, "What's up with you and wolves? They're just wild dogs!" Neil was slightly offended by the statement, but knew that his friend meant no harm. "You wouldn't understand." He said smiling. "Dinner's ready Neil!" Neil's mother yelled out of the window. Neil said bye to his friend and went inside to eat dinner. After dinner, Neil took a quick bath, then went into his room once it was dark outside. he lied down into his bed and shut his eyes, waiting for another day.
Shur'Tal
Neil woke with a start. He jumped out of his bed at the sound of a howl. He looked out of his window and into the sky. He saw nothing but a dark night sky and a full moon. He thought nothing of the full moon at the time. He shut his window and walked back to his bed, only to hear another howl. Neil thought to himself, That was not a wolf's howl. It was too deep and drawn-out. He quickly put on his clothes, rag, and shoes, and slowly and silently snuck out of the house. He had gotten out of the house, when suddenly, he heard a loud growl and another howl. He jumped and walked slowly toward the woods. he was getting closer to the howl once he reached the first few trees. He moved in slow calm motions, careful not to disturb whatever was making the howls. He couldn't stop thinking about worse case scenarios of what it could be. It could be a werewolf, or something else, or a murderer attracting curious people with howls. Neil thought at one point. He walked and walked for what seemed like hours until he saw a huge black creature standing there on it's hind legs howling. This was what was making the howling. Neil quickly hid behind a tree and peeked over his shoulder to get a look at it. He couldn't see it clearly so he tried to lean closer and squint his eyes, but stepped on a twig in the process. The beast swerved around at godly speed and growled. It had Illuminating yellow eyes and blood caked snout. Once the beast saw Neil's full form, it seemed to be afraid for a few seconds. It regained it ferocious look and snorted at Neil. Neil could only watch in shock. He could tell by the form or the creature, and the yellow eyes, that it was, in fact, a werewolf. neil could not even think about what to do next. Neil could barely think at all. The beast finally made the first move. it dashed towards Neil, baring it's fangs, and bit him on the forearm. neil could not move fast enough, and screamed in pain. He clenched his arm and could only think of one option. Run! He turned around and sprinted away from the beast as fast as he could run. Strangely, he did not run out of breath. He was perfectly fine. He soon noticed that he was running at inhuman speeds. He yelped and hid behind the closest tree. he looked over each shoulder and saw that the werewolf was gone. It had stopped chasing him. Neil sighed and sat down next to the tree. He looked at his arm and rolled up his sleeves to reveal his clean, smooth forearm. How had his wound healed so fast? He gasped and, seemingly instinctively, looked up at the bright moon and howled. He covered his mouth with his hands. he looked around desperately and dashed home. he had become a werewolf.
This has been the prologue, and the first part of chapter 1. let me know what you think in the comments!
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