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Is this project good or weak?

HalfDayCraftDay 8/7/14 12:34 am
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8/10/2014 1:55 pm
hows this look, be honest and leave a message on the project page ty
http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/ ... h-mansion/
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HalfDayCraftDay
Level 43 : Master Architect
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Vail
08/10/2014 1:55 pm
Level 14 : Journeyman Blueberry
I don't like the big dirt thing behind the house
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HalfDayCraftDay
08/10/2014 1:48 pm
Level 43 : Master Architect
Ty for the great ideas everyone I love all the feedback and great ideas on how to improve this project. Dont be shy, I dont mind constructive criticism at all. It will help make this a great project, not just an ok one
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paintsniffer
08/10/2014 12:43 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Network
Needs more depth in the walls, they're very flat
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Stubbs1
08/09/2014 8:43 pm
He/Him • Level 75 : Legendary uwu Senpai
Like everyone else.
It's way too simple. You need to work on Detail
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Starbxcks
08/09/2014 8:32 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Warrior
Honestly, it's really plain. It lacks depth, randomization, and complexity. I'd add some hidden lights. For example using jungle leaves on top of glowstone hides the ugly glowstone texture, while making giving off light and provides a nice bush like structure. Emboss the walls a bit more, too, maybe replace some blocks with stairs and extend or push in some of the walls. Highlight the windows more with darker planks as shutters, or use doors or trap doors as shutters. as far as the roof goes, maybe add in like a chimney, or another window peeking over the top. another thing you could do is add a waterfall or some interesting terrain in the background using MCedit or worldedit. There are many tutorials on youtube. Remember: Realistic is not very interesting,and that's why server builders build medieval or steampunk style. There are lots of youtube videos about adding depth and texture to builds, go check em' out. I'm not trying to be critical, just giving some tips to help you improve.
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HalfDayCraftDay
08/08/2014 12:53 am
Level 43 : Master Architect
thx for the advise, im currently putting more into the build, trying for less of a village insert and more of a small town. Maybe widen out the bottom and put some locks or boats in there too
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SackboyRocks
08/08/2014 12:03 am
Level 51 : Grandmaster Waffle
Sorry, but I'm going with weak. Needs more detail. Hopefully you gave it your best effort.
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HalfDayCraftDay
08/07/2014 11:44 pm
Level 43 : Master Architect
Ty for the feedback I will swap out some of the square houses and put in more curves. I deffo need to work on more detail with it, like some of my other projects and curvy roofs! I will put in more lamps. I used sues to render the pictures. Nexxo ty for your input but when a person jumps a a post agrees others in 4 words and puts Also why do you blah blah like i am using his computer memory to store the forum or a person like you that puts absolutely nothing pertaining to the post at hand, which easily could have easily been pm to me to for your Dr Phil moment lol. How is that any less insulting, it is just clearly not as direct. Thanks though for this thought provoking and mildly stimulating end to a fun build Happy Crafting
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WakkaCraft
08/07/2014 6:09 pm
Level 4 : Apprentice Network
1 out of 10 i give it at 5 its quite simple but still good.
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Reer123
08/07/2014 6:08 pm
Level 70 : Legendary Terraformer
Nice! But simple.. As someone said the torches don't look the best.
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Johnanater
08/07/2014 5:55 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Taco
I think it's good, I like these builds, I think it needs a little bit more detail. Keep building!
*EDIT*
Get rid of some of the torches on the sidewalks Put redstone lamps or piston lights
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Rickforge
08/07/2014 5:35 pm
Level 49 : Master Mythical Builder
I think you should practice on curvy roof designs and more detail
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Kingdomapbuilder
08/07/2014 11:02 am
Level 6 : Apprentice Network
Those pics are pro..
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HalfDayCraftDay
08/07/2014 10:43 am
Level 43 : Master Architect
Ty for the feedback i will add in more detail, and jackel I ask because I want to know what other people think. I build things for peoples enjoyment and use, maybe you should put more then one build that looks like a crack den before asking me why im inquiring about the quality of my builds. If you dont like it scroll on bud, for everyone else ty for the advise
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Nexxomeldi
08/07/2014 6:01 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
He was asking a question. There was no need to insult him
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CloudbunniesMC
08/07/2014 10:30 am
Level 20 : Expert Dragon
It does look simple, but simple is sometimes nice. Use your own style, not what other people demand of you :p


The pictures are very nice
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jackel01
08/07/2014 6:12 am
Level 28 : Expert Spider Rider
Yeah, its rather simple. Also, why do you keep making posts asking about your builds?
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cakeface
08/07/2014 5:53 am
Level 39 : Artisan Cake
It depends on who the person reviewing it is. Inexperienced would say Awesome! Best build ever whereas professional builders would say it's not the best of builds.
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monte carino
08/07/2014 10:25 am
Level 40 : Master Taco
Awesome! I guess I am inexperienced now...

Anyways.. I like this. It reminds me of my early survival days when I would build lovely bases on faction servers. ( I didn't know about TNT cannons then... Oh how I have learned.. )
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Animan2
08/07/2014 5:49 am
Level 60 : High Grandmaster Architect
Honestly...it looks simple...need more details
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