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Does this look cool?

Fuliren 12/19/13 1:20 pm
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12/19/2013 2:10 pm
Hey!

So I'm working on this texturepack (Simplecraft).

It's pretty simple and cartoonish. (It's not meant to look professional at ALL)

So shall I keep working on this? I like it but I need reviews

Here's a picture:

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Fuliren
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
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EmmieCF
12/19/2013 1:23 pm
Level 20 : Expert Unicorn
I really like it. You should totally keep working on it. It has great potential!
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Fuliren
12/19/2013 1:27 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
Thanks

If I get a lot of good feedback I'll post it when its done!
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Azie
12/19/2013 1:24 pm
She/They • Level 59 : Grandmaster Goblin Scribe
The bold, black lines all over everything make it look really disjointed. Also the dirt coloring on those grass blocks would look better if the clay/brown color wasn't so saturated and matched the grass a little more.
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Fuliren
12/19/2013 1:26 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
Yes I know about those black lines. Oh well.

But thanks for the feedback and tips tho
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cj1m
12/19/2013 1:30 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Modder
I quite like the style, it looks a bit like an old retro game, and it is certainly a unique texture pack, so I would continue on with developing it if I were you.
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atabler
12/19/2013 1:32 pm
Level 40 : Master Warrior
oh wow! niceeeeeeez!!!!
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Fuliren
12/19/2013 1:33 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
YAAAY!!!!111
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WolfRx
12/19/2013 1:34 pm
Level 7 : Apprentice Architect
It looks amazing but these black lines ruin it
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Fuliren
12/19/2013 1:36 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
I feel that way too. In the first thing it was without the lines, but belive me it is better now, even tho it kinda ruins it. Thanks for the feedback (I might find a solution later)
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Fuliren
12/19/2013 1:46 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
So I might have a solution for the black lines:
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I might replace them, but with what?
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dajakos
12/19/2013 1:51 pm
Level 28 : Expert Blockhead
With a not so black colour?
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Fuliren
12/19/2013 1:53 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
Dunno, Just something that makes it look awsome, Not another colour neccessary. But I just MIGHT change, it. I'll upload it, thats for sure with all this good feedback
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Irish
12/19/2013 1:56 pm
He/Him • Level 73 : Legendary Nerd
Maybe replace the black lines with a darker version the of blocks colour? (E:G, Dirt has dark green border, stone has dark grey)
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nrallstars
12/19/2013 2:10 pm
Level 24 : Expert Architect
Maybe just make the black lines a bit thinner? Anyways, it's quite good.
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