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Not everything needs to be high quality to be enjoyed by others (look at Skibidi). I know when I started writing my work sucked. At the time tho, I genuinely thought this was the best thing ever. If you're having fun, if you enjoy doing it, and if that makes you happy, then that's all that really matters.....unless you plan on going to a publisher, then a lot matters and they will crush you to dust-....anyways. First rule to anything, never compare yourself, because unless you are a professional, you will see your work as trash every single time. It took me so many years to actually look at something and be like, yeah, my work is more entertaining (not better, because you can't truly compare art for so many different reasons) than this.

If you want to offer constructive criticism, go for it, but its important to know what he is aiming for too. Like if he's just doing for fun and doesn't care of the outcome, let it go. If he's trying to learn or seek a career in this later on, definitely don't beat around the bush and put all on the table. The more he has to work with sooner, the faster he will become better at writing. If you got thoughts that may be too long to say in person, write them down as well and hand it to him. Maybe sticky post them thought-out the pages. Anyways, welcome to the world of beta reading lol

sandwich critique style > ( positive thing, work on thing, positive thing)

Be honest with him if you think its not good just tell him



I really needed to hear this right now writing my own book

uh yeah so I’m t1 diabetic so uh
give me the chocolate so I can get into a coma

real

i think that is actually the way cree8ball wrote a few videos

try to make a rough/basis

Not me imagining you literally cutting yourself open to see the cartilage inside your bones xd

May I ask how you write like this? I have thoughts like this but I don’t know how to actually write them out lol

The 16 personalities one I also feel like has the same questions over and over-

I never figured out the benefit to cussing.
I think a lot of people would stop if they knew the context for each word.

I notice I cuss in my dreams somehow, but I never do it irl, there’s just something uncomfortable about doing it

I don't curse at all,
But while I'm at work (specifically during the morning rush) it's just a stream of curses xd

i honestly don't see the pleasure in cussing, i would feel way too dirty and guilty if i cussed, so i've never done it

woah man, be careful with the language 😥
wouldnt want to scare someone

Woah! I actually agree with this so much

I relate to this so much.

hold up the writing is actually FIRE?!

My best is 95 I think- wait how is that 75???

is beautiful

in 20 years, i hope to not be dead, and to be a relatively successful person in the industry
then again if humanity comes to a close by 2028 that might be difficult to uphold ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
let life take its flow

pets are dangerous </3

in 20 years, i will be (hopefully) alive, my cats will most likely be dead, and i will exist.

How do we always go down these roads 😭
anyways I don’t remember your bedrock name and I still don’t have the friend request lol

but yeah in 20 years… I hope to be married and be a mod here :D

yeah that's about right

FOR REALLLLLL
it's so peak thoughhhh 🥲🥲😭😭

It’s not been that long! Once I didn’t post for 23 hours!

its not that long! Once I didn't post for 5 years!

its not that long! Once i didnt post for 2 weeks!

Insane how fast time goes by

justice effectively repays a debt. lets say someone drinks, gets behind the wheel, and injures an innocent driver. justice could look like paying off the victim's medical bills, entering rehab for alcoholism, and dedicating some time to discouraging drunk driving. it reforms the perpetrator to be a better functioning member of society, and betters the world as a whole. vengeance is punishment without repayment. in that situation, it could look like jail time with no rehabiitation, no payout to the victim, and no lessons learned.

If there’s no God, morality is made up.
Because God exists, that’s how you find absolute truth and the rules you’re talking about.
The source of all good and the difference between right and wrong knows what He’s talking about.

So, deeply, fascinating...
Morality as a whole, is.

Is morality, in the end, a social construct built to withhold the integrity of the human race?
Is it souly for the survival of society?
Or is it something more?

And when they make acceptions, what exactly is the "greater good" they do it for?
Merely protecting society from a murderer?
Protecting those you love?
And perhaps that is enough. Perhaps in a world that will take your loved ones away, perhaps taking someone else's is fine.
But an eye for an eye makes the world go blind...
But inaction has caused you to loose that loved one and the world has already moved on...


Wow, anywho-

Yep
i do it all the time:D

Now you getting it. 👍🏻

what

This is NOT dead on

talking about what has been labeled as a "monster soul" theres actually different "classes" under n u l l.

special-bars: "It's empty. It waits for its desire." (different format than the others so im seperating it)

special-disagree: "The one who wants nothing." "You disagreed with every choice the device offered. You have chosen to be void of any virtues."
special-neutral: "The one who cant choose anything." "You have chosen to choose nothing, and denied the device of its purpose."
special-agree: "The one who wants everything." "You wanted to take everything, and in turn, recieved nothing." (this is the one you got :33)

this made me inspect the page and some of the //notes (idk the right term) are pretty funny