First Adventure map: Quest for the Command Block

Hello Everyone,

A couple of weeks ago i decided to use my Minecraft knowledge to create an Adventure map.
In my spare time i build and create and "Quest for the Command Block" is the end result.

Please tell me what you thought of the map and if you have tips for me.

You are a succesful adventurer and live in the small village of TaigaTown.
It snows in the village for more than 3 decades. Food is harder to get with every month that passes.

The Mayors sons comes running towards you and tells you the Mayor has found a solution for the snow.

And than an (short) adventure starts. It will take you around 45 min to complete



This is my first adventure map so i can use tips and tricks. You comment or pm me.


Have fun and I might create more in the future.
(sorry if my english isnt perfect, i'm Dutch and the english grammer is differently than ours )