No offence, but it's a fail for a first skin, really. Here's why:
1. It's unoriginal. Haven't you seen how many teen / emo / hoodie / creeper / herobrine etc. skins are there on PMC? You MUST make something noone has done before, otherwise your skins will be unnoticed.
2. Lacks / has poor detail. Look at this. The eyes and the mouth are too low, they're fusing with those rope thingies. Make them higher. And why's the lower part of the head pitch black? And why is there a floating purple sheet on the back of his head?
Not like I try to speak rude of this skin, I just want you to pay attention to these two things before uploading any kind of submission.

Hey guys.ITs crap i know BUT,I would love suggestions to get MUCH better.And you may look at me and think.What a Noob.Can make Skins for Crap.Remember its my first so don't judge me.I will hopefully look forward and make better ones But i would LOVE if i could get some Suggestions.Thanks for taking the time to read this and yes please leave a Suggestion if you can.Thanks guys
~BenO (A.K.A Bennydude7)