While what you've got is pretty solid, you might want to spice up the presentation a bit. I'd change the title to something more unique, for instance "NannerPanda's Fun Pack". "My Frist Texture Pack is a bit more likely to be overlooked. Secondly, the progress bar says 100%, alter that if you want to keep the updates more accurate. Good luck with your pack, it looks pretty interesting. I've always liked the 16x16 packs best. Cheers.