*NOTE: This story is done in a diffrent style then most as it is told in the thoughts of the protagonists head, rather then first person present tense narration. Enjoy!*
*Tik tok, eight'oclock*
I open my car door and jump out. Just a quick and easy in and out deal at church, I need to get my phone which I left there.
I use the keys and open the double doors, its a big church.
Wait why are the lights on in this hallway? Ugh, nevermind, the keys are in the lost and found which is in the basement. God, why did you let these people build the basement entrance so far away? Okay, right, through the main worship area, oh jeez this is creepy. Okay, okay, you're fine, you're fine.
Wait, what was that? I had been hearing the buzz of electricity but now its stopped? Nevermind, the moonlight through the window is enough. Oh, there it is, I've found the door, good job me. Now as I open the door I see.... Pitch black. Shoot. I'm not going down there in the dark, maybey the breakers off. You are a electrician, so this should be an easy fix.

*Tik tok, nine'oclock*

God almighty, why'd they have to hide the breaker box? And how did I not find it? And why is this place so freaking creepy? I've been going here for taking on two years now so I should know the answer to all of those but I don't. Carrying on, why were all the breakers turned off? Oh jeez what am I, twelve? Why did that sound sexual to me? Augh so many thoughts and--

"Heeheehee"

WHAT THE !@#$ WAS THAT? WHAT THE #@!$? Ok sprint now, good, probably just, squeaky door right? Oh good God, what opend the door? Okay, turn the light on... BOOM! LET THERE BE LIGHT. One two three four five six seven eight okay! I'm down! Theres the box, and my pone, oh how I missed you.  Wait, I got invited to go clubbing tonight? Dangit, I could've--

*zzt*

Uuuuuuhhhhh... Okay, this is bad,why are the lights off again? Did the breaker get-- Oh my God. OH MY GOD. THE LIGHT SWITCH WAS ACTUALY FLIPPED, SOMETHING CAME DOWN HERE AND FLIPPED THELIGHT SWITCH! NOPE! SCREW YOU! NOT TURNING ANYTHING ELSE OFF! JUST GET OUT! JUST OH CR--

*Tik tok, ten'oclock*

Church.... Little boy... Pew.... Tombstone... Uuuh... The world is swimming.... Wait is that a person? Oh please don't run.... Gotta say something...

"elp... Elp... please... No! Where are you going?"

Wait, who else is here, is it morning? Why did he run? was that a she... Oof... Get up... Ooh the world's spinning okay okay just, yep, like that, walk, wheres my phone at? I can't leave here without it and tell people I got scared. Oh.... Dizzy...

*RING* *RING* *RING* *RING*

Oh good someone's calling me... Where is the... Wait, how the !@#$ did it get up on the pew? Okay maybey I threw it up there, theres a logical explination right?

*thump* *thump* *thump*

*RING* *RING* RI--* *Deet*

"H--"

"Nothereisn't"

*Click*

*SLAM*

What the !@#$? No, don't shake, just some prankster he couldn'nt have--- Just get. the #@$%. out.

*SLAM*

Run.

*thump* *thump* *thump*

Concentrate on the thumping of your feet on the floor.

*thump* *thump* *thump*

Leave the church, just get out! Never come back here please!

*click* *click* *clickclickclickclickclickclick*

"NO! GOD PLEASE HAVE MERCY! LET THE DOOR UNLOCK! GOD PLEASE! PLEASE! NO! WHO DID THIS! SHOW YOURSELF!"

*Tike tok, eleven'oclock*

I won't go back for the damn keys. Whatever is toying with me wants me back in the basement, I won't go. Wait what's that out the window? Its... Something is watching me... Please God, I am on my knees in church crying to you to save me from this.

"Godwon'thelpyouhere"

Run. #@$%ing run.

"Stop."

No I won't listen. I"m in the basement now, the light is on, I have my keys, now I just have to make it back. What's that smell?

*SLAM*

"Yourchurchhonorsnogod"

"STAY BACK! THIS IS A PLACE WHERE WE WORSHIP THE GOD OF THE BIBLE DEMON! GOD ALMIGHTY! I HAVE PRAYED BEFORE BUT NEVER LIKE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE SAVE ME!"

"Yourchurchworshipsmoney"

"Hey mister, why do you suppose God din't heal me after my family paid him every last cent?"

The voice, its so childlike, there are two of them, two demons. God please, please, please help me!

"Because my family paid a greedy, filthy man who took Gods name in vain and stole our money. AngelsnorGodprotectthisplace."

"Please *sob* let me go!"

"Neverreturnhere."

*Tik tok, twelve'oclock*

Journal Entry

4/7/022

I never returned to that place. The pastor file me for mental illness when I told him he was opening a door that need not be opend. All charges were dropped when the man died of a heart attack at twelve oclock at night. I left that building scared for my life, I gaine from it a closer walk with God. The demon could not have touched me, for I am of God's children. Since the day, I have never encountered anything quite as strange, but I devoted my career to missions, and getting the truth of God out there.

Fin

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Hey guys, I hope you enjoyed the story, if you did, leave a diamond, and if you didn't, ;eave a comment explaining why, so that I may better my skills as a writer.
As all good storys do, I drew insparation from something of truth.
I am personally a christian and I belive in God, and while the demon in my story and the powers God had were difrent from what I belive they do, I only did this to enforce fear. PLease keep in mind this was all purley fiction, and I do not claim that ghosts actually exist, or that demons can kill people or that God would not help a man who was in such a desprate need of him. However, I do belive certain churches can be greedy and so can certain ministers, that was the underlying theme here if you were looking for that *COUGH*BENNYHIN*COUGH*. Oh yeah, try not to launch a gian comment flame war over that, you have your opinions, I have mine. The Faun King is still coming, and I actually have a horror contest going where the winners getlinks to their PMC pages in it! Shweet right? Enter here, litterally right here. Also, I'm looking for feedback on the new style of writing, where instead of having the story told to you directly, you get it made out to you through the characters thoughts, I want to know if this confused you, or just added to the effect. As usual, thanks for reading, and subscribe if you want to read more scurry storees the day they come out.

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~ Wade Wayne