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How did he know!? You were hidden from sigHt!


 


You let him flEe! Escape into the night!”


 


The vaRmint trembled, as his voice thundered


 


“I gave you One task- find where he plundered


 


And Bring that mere mortal back to my door!”


 


He snarled with hot Rage, it fell to the floor


 


“It was not our fault!” The undead one crIed


 


“His frieNd had a bow- my crawling fiend died!


 


This was something that hE had not foreseen


 


The man has a friend? Why that is obscene!


 


For each year he had watcHed the human roam


 


He hAd not seen a soul near the man’s home.


 


But it proteSted, for two there had been


 


Man clothed in blue, and a woman in green.


 


This riled him fuRther. A woman, but how?


 


He had rid the world of thEm all, ‘til now


 


“This changes things...” As he knelT down and said


 


Yet you failed yoUr task, you’re better off dead.


 


Shrieking, it was thRown from fortress to fire


 


As blazes hissed aNd ghasts floated higher


 


The zombiE sank to a burning demise


 


The last thing it behelD…


 


 


 


Two gleaming white eyes.
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“How did he know!? You were hidden from sigHt!


 


You let him flEe! Escape into the night!”


 


The vaRmint trembled, as his voice thundered


 


“I gave you One task- find where he plundered


 


And Bring that mere mortal back to my door!”


 


He snarled with hot Rage, it fell to the floor


 


“It was not our fault!” The undead one crIed


 


“His frieNd had a bow- my crawling fiend died!


 


This was something that hE had not foreseen


 


The man has a friend? Why that is obscene!


 


For each year he had watcHed the human roam


 


He hAd not seen a soul near the man’s home.


 


But it proteSted, for two there had been


 


Man clothed in blue, and a woman in green.


 


This riled him fuRther. A woman, but how?


 


He had rid the world of thEm all, ‘til now


 


“This changes things...” As he knelT down and said


 


Yet you failed yoUr task, you’re better off dead.


 


Shrieking, it was thRown from fortress to fire


 


As blazes hissed aNd ghasts floated higher


 


The zombiE sank to a burning demise


 


The last thing it behelD…


 


 


 


Two gleaming white eyes.

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  • Monotone
  • Level 7
  • Apprentice Hunter
  • March 16, 2016, 12:43 pm
Surely there's no underlying base here. -u-

´╗┐this was nice
  • GrayRemnant
  • Level 56
  • Grandmaster Senpai
  • September 23, 2015, 2:19 pm
I like it, but I find it a bit vague for my tastes.  Really nice job, nonetheless!  ;)
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 23, 2015, 4:12 pm
Thank you! I was aiming for it to be quite vague- I've found that interpretation adds another layer to what would be one-dimensional writing. Also, having read a lot of other people's, their writing is all quite literal (e.g this happened then this happened) and I kinda just wanted to be different.
  • GrayRemnant
  • Level 56
  • Grandmaster Senpai
  • September 23, 2015, 5:07 pm
Well, you definitely set yourself apart.  My story actually has a hidden message as well, though it's actually in the paragraph itself.  It's kinda like a word search.
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 24, 2015, 6:15 am
Hmm sounds intriguing- I'd love to read it but i can't find it unfortunately..
  • GrayRemnant
  • Level 56
  • Grandmaster Senpai
  • September 24, 2015, 10:15 am
It's not finished yet.  Should be up on the 28th.  ;)
  • KittyRosie
  • Level 37
  • Artisan Pixel Painter
  • September 23, 2015, 12:33 pm
:)
You won
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 23, 2015, 4:10 pm
Aww no I don't think I can compete with people like Wind and Myra_
  • KittyRosie
  • Level 37
  • Artisan Pixel Painter
  • September 23, 2015, 4:37 pm
Oki well ur at LEAST top ten but I bet ul be higher
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 24, 2015, 6:16 am
Aww thx KittyRosie- fingers crossed!
  • KittyRosie
  • Level 37
  • Artisan Pixel Painter
  • September 24, 2015, 7:32 am
Yas ^u^
  • EGans2
  • Level 2
  • Apprentice Crafter
  • September 22, 2015, 3:51 pm
Yup, gonna get in the top 5 at least. It certainly beat mine! Very nice.
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 22, 2015, 4:14 pm
Thanks! If you really like it do you mind leaving a diamond for it? Only if you like it ofc
  • EGans2
  • Level 2
  • Apprentice Crafter
  • September 22, 2015, 4:59 pm
I already did.
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 22, 2015, 5:50 pm
Oh haha sorry xD thank you!
  • Beverly
  • Level 65
  • High Grandmaster Explorer
  • September 22, 2015, 8:51 am
This is absolutely, totally, completely fantastic. You are gonna win a place, girl. Seriously, this is so creative! I love the secret message, it's perfect.
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 22, 2015, 3:42 pm
Oh gosh thank you so much! But I don't think I can compete with yours~~
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 21, 2015, 11:51 pm
OH also for anyone who reads this, there is a secret message hidden in the poem- see if you can find it!~
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 22, 2015, 2:56 pm
Found it, but won't spoil it. ;)
  • Orbiter
  • Level 43
  • Master Fox
  • September 21, 2015, 7:34 pm
Love this
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy too much. x3
  • Panda
  • Level 48
  • Master Blob
  • September 21, 2015, 7:36 pm
Oh wow.. thank you so much! I'm just tryna update it :)

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