Published Apr 22nd, 2012, 4/22/12 3:53 pm
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Well, here's my first poem ever. I made it about a year ago, just after my depression. So, it's totally normal that this poem feels depressive. Here's how it goes:
Another empty day;
Some more empty thoughts;
Same empty heart;
In the same empty world.
Living for nothing;
I was born to die;
In 60 years or today;
What's the difference?
Just more pain.
If life is pain;
Is pain life?
I feel alive when;
I feel this pain.
But i want no more;
So i will train;
To protect my people.
For the rest of my empty life,
And fill my heart with love.
| Credit | My psychologist. |
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Update #1 : by Zedeik 04/22/2012 4:17:28 pmApril 22, 2012 @ 8:17 pm UTC
Just corrected some typos.
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I had my friend in my back, to watch my step, so i won't do anymore mistakes, and stuff i'd regret.
I tried to commit suicide once, and i got severe aftermath... After that i knew that wasn't a good idea, i regretted it, and my friends told me: " We told ya. :P"
I just convinced myself that life wasn't something that we get for free, there's stuff that we need to overcome, and whatever we do, we always need to put some efforts in it. And that's where most of the people let it go.
Seriously, there's a motto that says: "Whatever doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
It's not false, but it's not true. My suicide attempt didn't make me stronger, but i got the message. And i want to say it to everyone and i want everyone to get it too.
Life is an enjoyable thing, sometimes not, but most of the time it is, we live to have fun, we live to change the world. Like the baby-boomers did.
They changed the mentality of people, they changed a lot of thing, and everyone should follow this path. We all leave a little mark, everywhere we go, everything we do. If you do something prodigious, People will remember you and even make movies about you. That's what convinced me to keep going forward.
Sorry if this was a bit long. Thanks for your time, and i hope you don't make the same mistakes as me.
(P.S. There may be some typos, but i'm too lazy to check it out.. So, deal with it.)
I may post another one when i finish it, in a hour or so..
[EDIT] There you go, i post another one, may it be as good as you think :P