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Imm0rt41 Deviations: I Really ****** It Up This Time

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She said to stop....


I kept digging through....


She told me she wasn't lying....


I didn't listen....


She said she would do it herself....


I told her I would stop soon....


....and then


....the rocks came crashing down


....they fell all around me


....she wasn't as lucky


....I dug through the wreckage


....to find her body


And there she lay.


Her body crushed and bent.


A ragdoll of her beauty.


Her bones broken.


Her limbs bent.


Her spirit departed to heaven.


....and my friend gone forever....
CreditI had originally created this for a friend I thought I had lost. Now its just a pretty picture and story. You can find the original post here: http://imm0rt41.deviantart.com/#/d54r1uk
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Its not about rape : by Imm0rt41 06/25/2012 11:40:09 amJun 25th, 2012

Because so many idiots keep screaming RAPE at me, I changed 'pushing' to 'digging' because THAT IS WHAT THIS IS ABOUT.

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10/13/2012 9:43 am
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Prince-Kawaii
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I saw this on da..
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10/13/2012 10:26 am
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Imm0rt41
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Read the additional details. Its my work
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10/13/2012 2:42 pm
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Prince-Kawaii
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I know it's yours! :P

I found it cool that I found this!
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06/25/2012 12:19 pm
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Branko ProCrafter
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I don't get it , this happend in:

In real life

or

Minecraft

????
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06/25/2012 2:35 pm
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Imm0rt41
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it didnt happen at all. its a story i had written for a friend. i thought she was pissed at me, and i wrote a metaphorical story as an apology. this is not the original version, its modified to be more story than apology
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06/26/2012 5:22 am
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Branko ProCrafter
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ohhh... noww i get it....
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06/25/2012 12:01 pm
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DylanTheGamerBro
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This is a pathetic attempt at a "tug on the heartstrings" Now, if you'll excuse me, I have some Jaffa Cakes to eat.
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06/25/2012 2:34 pm
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Imm0rt41
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its not a sympathy story, its a story i had written for a friend. i thought she was pissed at me, and i wrote a metaphorical story as an apology. this is not the original version, its modified to be more story than apology
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06/25/2012 11:29 am
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Clue
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"She said to stop
I kept pushing through"

Oh, immortal, you sly dog.
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06/25/2012 11:49 am
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Imm0rt41
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i changed it to sound less like rape
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