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JTURNR
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Sunsets bring their scattered light...

Like swing-sets glide from left to right...

Blinding rays leave broken hallow...

Bright orange-red, the darkness swallows...

Sinking down into it's grave, thinking now...

"what can I save?"

Horizon line, a vague red glow...

The tears, "so fine," their steady flow...

Bucket of sorrow...Who was the tipper?

Rain drops into the little dipper...

Sky blown black...bright stars above...

Shadows blacken the night, moon, white as a dove...

Now we wait...through the deepest dark...

How hidden past can leave us marked...

Prepare to throw it all away...

The sky is turning...light-grey...

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kenworld1
09/28/2012 11:01 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Prince
I have read all of them, but only decided to comment on this one. commenting on this one because i felt "atracted" to this one the most. some of them were creepy to me, but the things i love are creepy. glad you suggested for me to look at your posts, because this is a type ofwriting that i dont really see often. I think you did awesome on them all keep writing.
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