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How did I get into this sticky situation?
I was simply taking a walk
But this tall and dark abomination
Seems to have stopped me, and not for a talk


He is tall and dark, and he wants to say
A friendly hello on this fine day
And although I really don’t want to stay
I find that I can’t pull away

From his deadly eyes, glowing
Purple and square, I find them staring
Small and scary, but I find him throwing
Me around the room, And I’m not concentrating


Hard enough, for me to find
My diamond sword which has gone to hide
In my inventory, and I can’t believe
That my only shelter would be a tree


As my hearts are drained, I say goodbye
And one last hit, marks my fate
As my health hits zero, and I lose all my dye
I respawn, hoping I am not too late

I am starting this new series of poems about minecraft, and I hope you all enjoy them! Please tell me in the comments what you think of my poetry!
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Update #1 : 02/11/2014 2:26:14 pmFeb 11th, 2014

Fixed 'Purple' being used twice.

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  • Mr_waffle
  • Level 32
  • Artisan Sailor
  • February 11, 2014, 3:58 pm
wtf...?
  • gabster187
  • Level 1
  • New Miner
  • February 11, 2014, 3:17 pm
cool
  • _AA1_
  • Level 18
  • Journeyman Nerd
  • February 11, 2014, 1:48 pm
Nice!
  • Blaze1017
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • February 11, 2014, 1:47 pm
Awesome! :-D DIAMONDS TOO YOU!
  • MTsteel
  • Level 25
  • Expert Archer
  • February 11, 2014, 12:48 pm
Haha. "My diamond sword is lost in my inventory".
  • AhriFoxFire
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • February 11, 2014, 12:30 am
If no one makes this into a song, I will...~

The only things I can see that wouldn't show as really Lyrical is the 2nd last line, and the Second verse (Where purple is said twice) Other than that I would pay for the song.

Diamond for chu <3
  • darksix360
  • Level 25
  • Expert Ninja
  • February 11, 2014, 9:23 am
Thank you! And thanks for telling me that purple is used twice, I completely missed that (lol) thanks again!
  • orangewaffle8
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Pokemon
  • February 10, 2014, 3:41 pm
nice poem, I'm thinking of posting my own poem since I'm decent at them. Problem is that it's not minecraft. :P
  • darksix360
  • Level 25
  • Expert Ninja
  • February 10, 2014, 9:51 pm
Thanks and good luck!
  • orangewaffle8
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Pokemon
  • February 11, 2014, 2:01 pm
I might not post it since it's not minecraft, but idk lol
  • Zylerius
  • Level 28
  • Expert Network
  • February 10, 2014, 2:33 pm
This is a really good poem. :) I like how it has a little calm wave-like rythme that reminds me of a song.
  • darksix360
  • Level 25
  • Expert Ninja
  • February 10, 2014, 9:51 pm
Thanks!
  • Zylerius
  • Level 28
  • Expert Network
  • February 11, 2014, 8:00 am
Your welcome. :)
  • PixelCrash_
  • Retired Moderator
  • Level 59
  • Grandmaster Pixel Puncher
  • February 10, 2014, 2:16 pm
Best poem of yours that I've read so far.

Here's a diamond.
  • darksix360
  • Level 25
  • Expert Ninja
  • February 10, 2014, 9:51 pm
Thank you Epic Max! :D
  • jedidguy10
  • Level 5
  • Apprentice Miner
  • February 10, 2014, 7:41 am
AWESOME you've got skills for sure!
  • darksix360
  • Level 25
  • Expert Ninja
  • February 10, 2014, 8:18 am
Thanks! :D

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