My First LP! Any recommendations on how to make it better or more interesting! Comment, Like, Subscribe! It all helps!

Alson if you could spare some money for me to buy a new computer so I can nexpand upon my game playing/get rid of the annoying fan noise just ndonate below!:

Links:
Texture pack:http://www.planetminecraft.com/texture_pack/wei-dynasty-pack18-ready/
Server forum: dingmanscraft.info

Ifn you can spare some money please donate below. I plan on using this to nbuy a new computer so you don't hear that annoying fuzz. Thanks:
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