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The Hellish Room

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The Hellish Room


I was caught, cornered by the evil ghast himself; Lucifer was his name. I was at the bottom of the Nether; I had nowhere to go. I asked Notch to forgive me, for everything I had done. Lucifer was getting ready to incinerate me with a deadly fireball. There was nothing I could do, helpless before the mighty Lucifer. Just before I had given up all hope of survival a hole opened in the center of the ceiling. It must have gone chunks high. I could see outside of the Nether. Clouds and the illuminating sun shining through it. A sparkling object was slowly descending; it had a holy glow around it. It landed on the ground, and the ceiling had closed. Lucifer was still shocked from what had just happened. I ran as fast as I could to the sword made of diamond. Lucifer had realized what was going on and came chasing behind. I leaped towards the sword, and grasped it tightly. As soon as I picked up the sword I blindly swung behind me. I killed Lucifer. He was lying on the scorching ground; lava began to ooze out of the wound. The room began to fill with it. There was no exit out of the room, and I was caught with no pickaxe. The lava was closing in; I could feel it on my toes. I looked over at Lucifer; the lava seemed to have no end. It looked as if he was still alive. My sandals had been burnt; I was sure of my end. Lucifer shed a single tear. It rolled down his body and into the wound. I closed my eyes for a minute and then opened. It turned to freezing obsidian! The walls of the room fell, and I could leave. I promised myself that I would change my ways and live a better life. Well, it turns out; I gave a pigman the wrong look, so he pushed me into a lava pit.

P.S.: I'm in a better place now.
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05/27/2012 2:44 pm
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doublejinxx
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Excellent story! I like the mix of real (or mythical) things (e.g. lucifer) and Minecraft things to make kind of a scary, hellish world that can be defeated.
The end is hilarious btw:)

Diamond 4 u!
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05/27/2012 5:47 pm
Level 25 : Expert Cake
ElderJohn
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Lol thanks for the feedback :P
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05/26/2012 2:57 pm
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OwenRulez
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Best...Story...EVA
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