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The Wrath of Bentifor (Chapter 1)

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Wrath of Bentifor

Chapter 1

Jolly olo Pantathat was just 8, while he sat in his Grandmothero s house, for he is unaware of what unimaginable things that might become of him.
o Read me a story!o asked Panthathar impatiently.
o Not now young one, weo ll read one later, I promise!o Grandmother replied.
o But please! Please grandma! There is nothing to do! Really! Io m serious!o Pantathar replied.
o Oh, okay then, if you insist, you cheeky little boy!o
o Oh thank you! Thank you!o exclaimed Pantathar, as he went to hug is Grandmother.

The Grandmother, also known as Marius, or Mari, took out an old book entitled o Ye Olo Myths of Feredomo With a symbol on the cover. The book was ripper, had bent pages, and was covered in dust. To Mari, this book was her treasure.
o Panta, this book is a treasure to me! Io m sure youo ll love it too!o Mari said while showing Pantathar the Myths. o Pick one!o
o Hmmmm,o Pantathar though, o How abouto ¦ the Foreigner and the Carnival? I like carnivals!o
o Okay, here we go then!o Mari said, and took a deep breath.


o It was a Halloween party in the very small town of Shintre. Shintre is a village up in the trees, houses built inside of huge hollowed out plants. The bridges connected the trees together, and their knot making was excellent. Shintre is on the outskirts of the capital of Nylanthia, an elvern country. Nylanthia was a forest-plain area. Nylanthia's location was in the heart of Zentilarn. Zentilarn was full of massive plains and forest greenery as far as the eye can see, except for some cities of course. And finally the planet they lived on was Feredom, a wonderful world with volcanic islands, large forests, great plains, and even underwater towns.


Anyways back to our small story after describing where the heck we were. Halloween isn't like Halloween on Earth. No, No, No. It's more based on their gods, not creepy monsters. Gods like Zenfi (The water and moon god), Fernagar (The fire and sun god), Tereinor (The earth and substance god), and even Nylansi (The air and Sky god). The spectacular party is on Noula, 25th. (Or on Earth that'd be September, 12th).


Amazing costumes were made, lots of great foods and drinks. An elvern party for the kiddos. But foreigners were never allowed in. There was a tubby little dwarf that had a blue-white beard.He had a small blue hood, and was wearing a white tunic with the most expensive cloth. The dwarf had been wanting to see the wonderful displat for years! But the guards never let him in.


This time he tried once more, "May I come in?" he yelled up towards the guards.

"No you little urchin, how many times must we tell you?" The guard yelled at him.

"But I've been waiting for years! How much longer must I wait?!" The dwarf complained.

"You wont ever be able to go inside. Now go!"

The sad little dwarf walked slowly away towards the vine ladder to return.

"Wait!" A tiny elf whispered, "Over here! Quickly now."

The surprised, little bearded man followed the elvern child to a back entrance.

"Thank you!" The dwarf said, and started to transform. He became a tall bright being.

"You have done well young one," The mysterious being said, "My real identity is Nylansi, and for your kindness, I will grant you one wish in your life."

"I do not want anything, but meeting you was a real honor. Would you like to come inside?" The little child asked.

"No, I can't. I have duties to attend to. But I can assure you one thing: Something great will happen in your life."

Nylansi walked away and went into the sky. The little elvern child waved goodbye.


The elf, with the name of Beinal, grew older and moved to Nylanthia's capital city, Peinor, and he eventually became the king.o

Meanwhile Zantar, Pantatharo s 10 year old brother, was walking in the garden. Zantar was a disobedient, spoiled brat with THE BIGGEST anger issues. He looked through Grandma Mario s window to find that she was reading a story to Pantathar.
o Stupid little bratty attention whore. He gets everything he wants! But I will get my revenge one day!o we whispered to himself. Zantar, infuriated, walked to his room pretty pissed off, punched the wall, threw darts at Pantatharo s face, and several horrible things that would upset Pantatharo s calm ways.

Back to Grandma Mari and Pantathar, they were both still in the room while Zantar was blowing off some steam.
o Wow that was amazing Grandma! Can we read another? Asked Pantathar.
o No, no, child, for you must get some rest, your 4 week holiday is finally over, but when you come back you may here more. Now tomorrow you have a big day! You have to pack!o Mari replied.
So Pantathar walked off away to his room, on the opposite side of Zantaro s. And there Pantathar rests for tomorrow in his imaginary lands of dreams. He never had nightmares, for he never had evil thoughts. He was almost like a perfect angel.

The next morning, very, very early, Pantathar wouldo ve started packing, but instead he did something that would remove his halo. He stealthily went towards Mario s room to steal, yes steal! Steal what exactly? Well the o Mytho book ofcourse! But instead of going inside, he unexpectedly saw someone through the old ragged door. It was Zantar! The bastard wanted that precious book too!
o Hey! Stop! You crook!o Pantathar yelled stupidly
o No you little whore!o
Both children fought over the book tugging and pulling and shoving eachother for a good 5 minutes.
o Give it to me!o Yelled Pantathar
o No! Ito s mine!o
o Mine!o
o Mine!o
*Riiiiiiiiip*
Then there was a long silence. Both children looked at the pieces of paper on the floor, then at eachother. Ofcourse the silence shattered.
o You did it punk!o Zantar yelled.
o No way! You tried stealing the book! You did ito Pantathar replied
o Well so did you!o
o Your fault!o
o No ito s yours!o
o No it is definitely yo- hey whato s this?o Pantathar said, looking at the stone.It was a large black seal, the one from the cover of the book! Made from the purest of iron. About 4 inches in diameter as well. In the center it had a ruby of glistening beauty.
o Ito s mine!o Pantathar yelled and ran off to finish packing. Zantar just stood there in shock. Then Mari came in.
o What have you done!?o Mari yelled, looking at the ripped pages and pieces of paper on the floor, then at Zantar. Zantar still stood looking in his Grandmothers eyes.
o Get. Out. Now!o Mari said.

After Zantar and Pantathar were done packing, they left for home on a bus. It was a long, slow ride home about 10 hours from their home in the city and grannyo s home in the forest. 10 hours and 20 mins to be exact. Zantar played on his GBA, Pantathar dared not take out the seal and just watched the rain pour down the window. When they finally arrived it was midnight. One of the darkest too. Pantathar and Zantar got home and went to there rooms. Pantathar put the seal under his pillow and went to bed and Zantar stayed up all night. The Zantar snuck into his brothers room, and looked for his seal.
o Found it!o he yelled and hit the ruby in the center. Then Pantathar woke up and a portal appeared. It sucked them both into a time-space travel. This was one of the weirdest things that happened.
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Update #1 : by Kazoto 09/28/2012 11:13:16 pmSep 28th, 2012

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