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ShatteredWinter
Lvl 3Apprentice Explorer
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HELLO! Im a writer. Noice to meet ya too.




Toast.




Anyways here's a story im working on :)

The War



Screams rang out from the audience. I yelled once again to the leader of our pack. “No! Please don’t! I promise you she won’t do it again! Please! Scarlette! No! Please I beg you!” A body guard put my hands behind my back. “Please! Take me instead!” I yelled. “Let go of me! Scarlette! Scarlette no!” Tears we’re rolling down my cheeks. The body guard started to take me away from the crowd. “I demand you to let go!” I yelled. He stayed silent, still taking me away. “I said let go!” I was squirming trying to get free. I yelped. The crowd went silent. I didn’t know what happened, my eyes we’re shut from crying. The crowd crying, some screaming. Before I could say anything, something was shot into my arm. I saw my brother running towards me, crying, before I blacked out.

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Domio
10/26/2016 5:38 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
THE DRAWNG SUCKS POO IM LAFIN SO HAR SHE DOESNT EVEN HAVE EYEBROWS HER HAR LOKS RETARDED LIKE THICC POO LOOOOOO SHES A NUN im not even gona start with the story
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karma police
11/12/2016 5:03 pm
Level 6 : Apprentice Network
Well,if you dont like the story,drawing,or the content in general,then just dont click on it.Its that simple.I repeat,if you dont like the content,just dont read it,or click in it.
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Milku
10/26/2016 11:55 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Dragon
What a jerk. I think your story is amazing xMissWisteria, and so is the drawing. Do not listen to the haters. Especially because this guy is just a cyber bully. Btw i love how you handled it. by saying "Thanks soooo much on the advice" xD. <3
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Domio
10/27/2016 7:01 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
and u cant see
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ShatteredWinter
10/27/2016 7:22 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Explorer
By the way you can't spell, nor can you write like I can so you shouldn't be saying anything.
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Domio
10/28/2016 10:53 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
bye te wey i nvr wanteed tu right lick u so u shudnt bee seyin anythng!!!! .-.
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ShatteredWinter
10/29/2016 10:53 am
Level 3 : Apprentice Explorer
Jerk.
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ShatteredWinter
10/27/2016 6:20 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Explorer
Oh thank you. x3
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ShatteredWinter
10/26/2016 8:03 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Explorer
Thanks, my sister drew it. I made the story. Thanks soooo much on the advice, your so nice. :)
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ShatteredWinter
10/25/2016 9:04 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Explorer
Oh btw the drawing is the character telling the story. Enjoy! :)
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