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BEFORE YOU READ THE STORY THE CONCEPT WAS CREATED BY CYRUS JAZZBERRY. NOW, TO THE STORY
The Year Was 1975. The year 2012Commander Was Born. A Scientist by The Name Of Barry J. Cyrus Is Working On A Solution To A Common Death On Long-Term Arctic Expeditions, Pneumonia. He Created A Series Of Nanobots He Called "Celcius Droids" That Will Create Combustion In The Human Body If Temperatures Get Below 65º Farenheit. The Bots, However, Malfunctioned. There Was A Crack In The Coolant Tank Which Released A Toxin Into the Bloodstream, Slowly Killing The Test Subject. He Knew One Catalyst For This Polymer: Liquid Nitrogen. The Nitrogen Had To Be Supercooled Into A Solid State Then Injected Into The Bloodstream Via Syringe. The Toxin, Instead Of Dissipating, Mutated Into A Pathogen. The Virus Then, Using The Injected Liquid Nitrogen, Froze The Natural Nitrogen In The Blood, Killing The Patient. The Next Night, The Patient Arrived Into The Doctor's Office, Slicing His Arm. Barry Killed The Corpse By Flaming It With A Flamethrower. The Doctor Boarded Himself In, Knowing What Would Happen To Him. The Pathogen Would Turn Him Into A Monster Like His Client.
1994: SLIGHTLY EDITED VERSION OF ORIGINAL FRIGORE MORTIS STORY HAPPENS
PRESENT:
(2012Commander Is Talking To Fritz On His Cell Phone)
2012Commander: "Hey, Fritz, I Heard From Anthony There Has Been Something Going On In A Bunker On This Canadian Island. I Think We Should Investigate.
Fritz: Ok, Man, Sounds Cool!
(2 Hours Later, they Arrive At The Island)
2012Commander: Well, This Is It. I Think This Is The Right Bunker. Here In the Early Nineties We Would've Been Standing In A Non-Canadian Official No-Go Zone, Glad Were Here Now, And Not Then, Right? Heh Heh Heh
Fritz: Yeah, But I Heard This Same Building Was The Site Of A Mad Doctor's Laboratory Back In The Seventies. Now THAT'S A Time I Wouldn't Be Here For.
2012Commander: Alright Let's Go In The (air quotes) "MAD LAB" oooooooooooh VERY SCARY!
Fritz: Shut Up. (rolls eyes) If You Heard What Experiments Went On In There You'd Be In Hawaii Right Now.
2012Commander: Let's Just Go In.
(opens door, walks down main hall)
2012: God, What A Dump, Looks Like Some Party Went On In Here.
Fritz: Yeah, And It Smells Like Moldy Cheese In Here.
2012: (Holds Nose And Hacks) AH GAWD. WHAT A PLACE TO LIVE IN...
Fritz: Don't Make Me Puke, I Don't Like Hearing "Throat" Noises.
2012: (Purposely Continues Hacking) Heheh
Fritz: STOP! (Punches In Arm)
2012: Jeez I Though You Were Kiddi- WHAT'S DAT?!?!?!?
(Frigore Mortis Creature In Pouncing Pose 10 Inches From Fritz)
Fritz: What? (looks behind him) (screams like girl)
2012: RUUUUUUNN!!!!
Fritz: AAAAAAHHHH!!!! (Runs)
(Creature Lunges At 2012Commander)
2012: AGH!!!
(2012 Throws Creature Off Of Him And Shoots With Glock 17) (Creature Is Unharmed)
2012: WHAT THE...
(Creature Lunges At Him Again, Blue "Tear" Gets In His Eye)
(2012 Sees Flamethrower Sitting In A Corner, Grabs And Kills The Infected Doctor)
Fritz: 2012Commander? 2012??? Hey Where Are U?
???: uuuuuuuhhhh
Fritz: ???
(sees another frozen nightmare)
Fritz: JESUS!!! (Runs)
(Creature Follows Slowly)
Fritz: (looks at paper on floor) What's This?
Doctor's Notes: (Fritz reads aloud) January 5, 1975 I've Made A Mistake. The Celsius Droids Are Leaking Poison Into The Pateints Body, He's Slowly Dying. Attempting To Counteract With Liquid Nitrogen Infusion.
January 7, 1975 It's Watching Me, At Every Waking Moment, It Watches Me, Waiting For Me To Turn Around, So It'll Kill Me. The Pathogen Feeds On The Bodies Brain Except For The Cerebellum And The Temporal Lobe. This Allows For The Body To Still Walk Around And Infect People. The... Liquid... They Produce Is A Mixture Between The Constantly-Evolving Pathogen And Liquid Nitrogen. I Think It's Sentient. I Thought I Killed It With A Flamethrower, But I'm Not For Sure.
January 8, 1975 I Know It's Dead. I'm Standing In Front Of It's Lifeless, Still Body. The Parasitic Symbiosis Between Man And The Virus Mad An Entirely New Species, They Have Merged, IN ME. I've Decided To Call It... Me... Frigore Mortis, Which Means "Death By Freezing" In Latin. I've Also Named The Virus-Nitrogen Molecule "Rigentum Fluidum" Meaning "Freezing Fluid" My Skin is Turning Blue. I Can Feel My Heart Getting Weaker As I'm Writing This. Farewell My Beloved Wife And Daughter. I'll Miss Yo-----------------__________
Fritz: (tears) Gawd, What A Heart-Wrenching Story. I Need To (slowly gets quieter) Publish... Dat.... O-O
Fritz: (nervously grins) See Ya! (runs and leaves building)
What He Didn't Know Was That The Frigore Mortis He Saw Was The Infected 2012Commander. Since He Only Got A Small Drop In His Eye, Not A Major Flesh Wound Like The Doctor, It Slowly Ovetook Him. Some Say He Never Died. Out Of Anger, He Ripped His Green Jacket And Pants, Tore Some Of His Hair Out, And Removed His *CCR. Now, If You Ever Go To The Canadian Tundra, Never Turn Your Car Lights Out, Never Open Your Window, And Never, I SAY NEVER! Stop For A Frostbitten Hitchhiker On The Side Of The Road, Even Though He Means No Harm, It's Better Safe Than Sorry. -Fritz's Son Marcus
Oh No, I've Made A Creepypasta... But Anyway Heres My Newest Skin Showing ANOTHER Death For Me! YAY! It's Probably A Parallel Dimension... But Thanks To Cyrus Jazzberry For The Epic Storyline And Idea And I'll See You Guys Next Time!
*CCR- Cereberal Cortex Regulator
The Year Was 1975. The year 2012Commander Was Born. A Scientist by The Name Of Barry J. Cyrus Is Working On A Solution To A Common Death On Long-Term Arctic Expeditions, Pneumonia. He Created A Series Of Nanobots He Called "Celcius Droids" That Will Create Combustion In The Human Body If Temperatures Get Below 65º Farenheit. The Bots, However, Malfunctioned. There Was A Crack In The Coolant Tank Which Released A Toxin Into the Bloodstream, Slowly Killing The Test Subject. He Knew One Catalyst For This Polymer: Liquid Nitrogen. The Nitrogen Had To Be Supercooled Into A Solid State Then Injected Into The Bloodstream Via Syringe. The Toxin, Instead Of Dissipating, Mutated Into A Pathogen. The Virus Then, Using The Injected Liquid Nitrogen, Froze The Natural Nitrogen In The Blood, Killing The Patient. The Next Night, The Patient Arrived Into The Doctor's Office, Slicing His Arm. Barry Killed The Corpse By Flaming It With A Flamethrower. The Doctor Boarded Himself In, Knowing What Would Happen To Him. The Pathogen Would Turn Him Into A Monster Like His Client.
1994: SLIGHTLY EDITED VERSION OF ORIGINAL FRIGORE MORTIS STORY HAPPENS
PRESENT:
(2012Commander Is Talking To Fritz On His Cell Phone)
2012Commander: "Hey, Fritz, I Heard From Anthony There Has Been Something Going On In A Bunker On This Canadian Island. I Think We Should Investigate.
Fritz: Ok, Man, Sounds Cool!
(2 Hours Later, they Arrive At The Island)
2012Commander: Well, This Is It. I Think This Is The Right Bunker. Here In the Early Nineties We Would've Been Standing In A Non-Canadian Official No-Go Zone, Glad Were Here Now, And Not Then, Right? Heh Heh Heh
Fritz: Yeah, But I Heard This Same Building Was The Site Of A Mad Doctor's Laboratory Back In The Seventies. Now THAT'S A Time I Wouldn't Be Here For.
2012Commander: Alright Let's Go In The (air quotes) "MAD LAB" oooooooooooh VERY SCARY!
Fritz: Shut Up. (rolls eyes) If You Heard What Experiments Went On In There You'd Be In Hawaii Right Now.
2012Commander: Let's Just Go In.
(opens door, walks down main hall)
2012: God, What A Dump, Looks Like Some Party Went On In Here.
Fritz: Yeah, And It Smells Like Moldy Cheese In Here.
2012: (Holds Nose And Hacks) AH GAWD. WHAT A PLACE TO LIVE IN...
Fritz: Don't Make Me Puke, I Don't Like Hearing "Throat" Noises.
2012: (Purposely Continues Hacking) Heheh
Fritz: STOP! (Punches In Arm)
2012: Jeez I Though You Were Kiddi- WHAT'S DAT?!?!?!?
(Frigore Mortis Creature In Pouncing Pose 10 Inches From Fritz)
Fritz: What? (looks behind him) (screams like girl)
2012: RUUUUUUNN!!!!
Fritz: AAAAAAHHHH!!!! (Runs)
(Creature Lunges At 2012Commander)
2012: AGH!!!
(2012 Throws Creature Off Of Him And Shoots With Glock 17) (Creature Is Unharmed)
2012: WHAT THE...
(Creature Lunges At Him Again, Blue "Tear" Gets In His Eye)
(2012 Sees Flamethrower Sitting In A Corner, Grabs And Kills The Infected Doctor)
Fritz: 2012Commander? 2012??? Hey Where Are U?
???: uuuuuuuhhhh
Fritz: ???
(sees another frozen nightmare)
Fritz: JESUS!!! (Runs)
(Creature Follows Slowly)
Fritz: (looks at paper on floor) What's This?
Doctor's Notes: (Fritz reads aloud) January 5, 1975 I've Made A Mistake. The Celsius Droids Are Leaking Poison Into The Pateints Body, He's Slowly Dying. Attempting To Counteract With Liquid Nitrogen Infusion.
January 7, 1975 It's Watching Me, At Every Waking Moment, It Watches Me, Waiting For Me To Turn Around, So It'll Kill Me. The Pathogen Feeds On The Bodies Brain Except For The Cerebellum And The Temporal Lobe. This Allows For The Body To Still Walk Around And Infect People. The... Liquid... They Produce Is A Mixture Between The Constantly-Evolving Pathogen And Liquid Nitrogen. I Think It's Sentient. I Thought I Killed It With A Flamethrower, But I'm Not For Sure.
January 8, 1975 I Know It's Dead. I'm Standing In Front Of It's Lifeless, Still Body. The Parasitic Symbiosis Between Man And The Virus Mad An Entirely New Species, They Have Merged, IN ME. I've Decided To Call It... Me... Frigore Mortis, Which Means "Death By Freezing" In Latin. I've Also Named The Virus-Nitrogen Molecule "Rigentum Fluidum" Meaning "Freezing Fluid" My Skin is Turning Blue. I Can Feel My Heart Getting Weaker As I'm Writing This. Farewell My Beloved Wife And Daughter. I'll Miss Yo-----------------__________
Fritz: (tears) Gawd, What A Heart-Wrenching Story. I Need To (slowly gets quieter) Publish... Dat.... O-O
Fritz: (nervously grins) See Ya! (runs and leaves building)
What He Didn't Know Was That The Frigore Mortis He Saw Was The Infected 2012Commander. Since He Only Got A Small Drop In His Eye, Not A Major Flesh Wound Like The Doctor, It Slowly Ovetook Him. Some Say He Never Died. Out Of Anger, He Ripped His Green Jacket And Pants, Tore Some Of His Hair Out, And Removed His *CCR. Now, If You Ever Go To The Canadian Tundra, Never Turn Your Car Lights Out, Never Open Your Window, And Never, I SAY NEVER! Stop For A Frostbitten Hitchhiker On The Side Of The Road, Even Though He Means No Harm, It's Better Safe Than Sorry. -Fritz's Son Marcus
Oh No, I've Made A Creepypasta... But Anyway Heres My Newest Skin Showing ANOTHER Death For Me! YAY! It's Probably A Parallel Dimension... But Thanks To Cyrus Jazzberry For The Epic Storyline And Idea And I'll See You Guys Next Time!
*CCR- Cereberal Cortex Regulator
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