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Cool Story! - Desert Sands

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Level 26 : Expert Scribe
----The Desert Sands---

The young boy looked down at the village, thiristy for a drop of water, slowly, he craws towards the city. He notices a man selling goods, and asks him to spare some water, slowly, the man gives him a water bottle. The boy begins to gulp it down, and thanks the man, and the man asks him for some coin, unable to pay, the Boy is forced into labor from the man, lest he be punished, flogged, and put in jail.

"Work faster!" Yelled Adhar, the owner of the "Jeweled Sultan". The boy, named Ali Saud, to tired to work, collapsed. Adhar, began to beat the boy, the townsfolk just kept walking. Eventually, night came, and Ali Saud rested his head next to the hay. "What have I done wrong?" He asked himself. Ali Saud finally found sleep, but he awoke to Adhar, and several guards. "This boy stole from me!" He said, with a grin. The guards took Ali Saud, and began to beat him even more. "Please, enough" he asked. The guards just looked at each other, beating him more. He soon found himself in a cell, with a broken arm. To scared to say anything, he just layed there, quitely sobbing. A young boy passed by, and saw him.

"You there, what is your name?" The young boy asked, smiling. Ali Saud looked up, noticing the boy, he was small, and was well groomed. "Ali...Saud", he said, struggling to talk. "My name is Prince Abdual, I'm the Sultans son. Why are you here?" He asked. Ali Saud just nodded, and began to speak, in a very tiresome voice. "I accepted Water from Adhar, he owns the Jeweled Sultan". The other boy began to laugh, clapped his hands, and two Guards came to his side. "Why have you jailed my friend here? Uncuff him, and get a physician to fix his arm". The young prince walked away, towards the palace doors.
--One Month Later--

Ali had just recovered from his broken arm, when the young boy came back. "Hello..Ali? Yes, I recall it was Ali", said Prince Abdual. "The man who did this to you, Adhar, he has been taken care of." Abdual said, pointing towards the empty noose. "I like you, and I'd like to know, do you have any family?" He asked, Ali was not really in the mood, in fact, he tried to ignore the eager Prince, who he did not like, thought he was annoying, "like a fly". "No, they all died." He said.


06/21/2012 10:57 pm
Level 45 : Master Network
may i add this to my minecraft library? you get all the credit
06/22/2012 9:48 am
Level 26 : Expert Scribe
Sure, I don't mind. It is not finished, I might make it a long story, but I'm more of a short story guy! And go ahead, thanks! If you'd like, I have other stories.
06/22/2012 11:08 am
Level 45 : Master Network
cool, ill add the other stories to
06/21/2012 9:09 pm
Level 1 : New Crafter
Such a work of art, a masterpiece!
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