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Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
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Creepy Mansion English
Creepy Mansion German






I hope you liked this story if so then I would be very happy about a diamond ^ ^
Yours sincerely jessy999
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11/25/2017 3:12 pm
Level 25 : Expert Architect
Subpartikel
Great story

Even though I only understood 5% of the German part
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11/25/2017 3:23 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
thx ^^

Ahm if you can speak better English but read the English part ^ ^
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11/25/2017 3:25 pm
Level 25 : Expert Architect
Subpartikel
I understand English very well and I know basic German.
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11/25/2017 3:27 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ok ^^
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11/19/2017 8:28 am
Level 1 : New Miner
Chica Chicken
I think the atmosphere is very good but I think there is something missing. I do not know what.

Actually, why did not you insert a replay there? Why do you have to download it first? This is also the case if you tell the story yourself.

Can not you change that yet?
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11/19/2017 8:32 am
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
Thanks ^^ That was the first time I made an atmosphere like that.

Unfortunately I can not insert an automatic playback because it does not work.
Although I could upload that on Youtube but I would like to do something later on Youtube.

I try to make it better for the next project ^ ^
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11/19/2017 8:33 am
Level 1 : New Miner
Chica Chicken
ok
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11/13/2017 11:40 am
Level 1 : New Miner
Dragon879
OK, now I understand it
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11/13/2017 1:25 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ok
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11/11/2017 2:14 pm
Level 48 : Master Fox
Angel
Good luck!
I hope you'll win.
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11/11/2017 3:33 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
Why is the bottom part crossed out? (you do not coincide with or?)
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11/11/2017 3:38 pm
Level 48 : Master Fox
Angel
Um?i just want you win on that contest.
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11/11/2017 4:13 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ok (and why is that deleted?)
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11/11/2017 10:31 am
Level 38 : Artisan Ranger
AviationWolf
this is so meh!?
I don't understand.
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11/11/2017 4:17 pm
Level 38 : Artisan Ranger
AviationWolf
I don't understand the pacing.
try improving the pacing.
Dat's all.
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11/12/2017 6:55 am
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
So should I tell this story a bit more objective and slower?
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11/12/2017 9:55 am
Level 38 : Artisan Ranger
AviationWolf
Yes
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11/12/2017 10:27 am
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ok, i added more details now (and told it a little more awkwardly)
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11/11/2017 11:04 am
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ok, what do you not understand in the story (then I can do better) ^^
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11/09/2017 9:36 am
Level 32 : Artisan Wolf Whisperer
GoggleD0GG
???
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11/09/2017 2:30 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
why ???
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11/09/2017 8:46 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Wolf Whisperer
GoggleD0GG
I have no clue what’s going on, very hard to read.
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11/10/2017 12:37 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
Dragon879
I feel the same
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11/10/2017 12:38 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
Dragon879
I can't read it
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11/08/2017 12:37 pm
Level 50 : Grandmaster Mountaineer
DUCATISLO
meh
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11/08/2017 12:40 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
I'll change it completely on Saturday again.
I scream when I change it again
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11/08/2017 2:18 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
I started this story again from the beginning. On Sammstag I look for spelling mistakes. On sunday I try to tell the story and insert it here and on Wednesday I try to change the picture a bit
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11/08/2017 12:05 pm
Level 38 : Artisan Ranger
AviationWolf
This isn't about a manison.
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11/08/2017 12:31 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ahm .. actually this is about a forest that nobody should enter.
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11/08/2017 2:18 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
I started this story again from the beginning. On Sammstag I look for spelling mistakes. On sunday I try to tell the story and insert it here and on Wednesday I try to change the picture a bit
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11/08/2017 11:23 am
Level 1 : New Miner
Dragon879
Jessy i cant understand this Story pleace fix the formatting
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11/08/2017 11:25 am
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
ok I'll try to do better on saturday ^^
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11/08/2017 2:18 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Wolf
jessy999
I started this story again from the beginning. On Sammstag I look for spelling mistakes. On sunday I try to tell the story and insert it here and on Wednesday I try to change the picture a bit
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11/09/2017 11:59 am
Level 1 : New Miner
Dragon879
Ok

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