Lego Minecraft Cave Hunger! The ending

Published Sep 26th, 2015, 9/26/15 1:55 am

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LimeeFox
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Steve continued mining this iron ore, he thought that the mobs's feet sounds were imagination. The ore didn't break, Steve Shook faster, and his brandishing hit zombie's head. Steve heard "aiie" of zombie and looked back. Zombie got Concussion and falled in lava. Spider was watching him burn and laughed. Steve spoted the spider and jumped throwing his picaxe up very high because got scared. Steve quickly drunk Leaping potion and leaped to the chest. The spider made a horrible noise like girl's screeming. A lot of red squares appeared at the roof. Then they went down to the floor. They were Spiders. They started to make a spider stair and were near Steve. He could die in 1 minute. But that moment 4 Ninja's appeared Around Steve. They are from LEGO NINJAGO! There were more spiders coming and fighting. Suddenly The roof Exploded. There were Shuttles from LEGO STARWARS! They were shooting spiders. But spiders threw cobweb on them. Steve took a computer from the chest and quickly typed:
Steve: Alex, Teleport!
Alex: Coming!
Alex teleported to Steve with tnt in her hand. She quickly placed the tnt in the middle of the cave and activated it.
Alex left the game.
The TnT exploded and everything was white.Steve appeared in a hospital in a bed. He seated. He looked around and saw Ninjas in beds and a 5th person with Black eyes and Green skin. It was that burnt zombie. At this moment: the picaxe finally falled on the ore and broke it.

Credit	LimeFox
Tags	Minecraft Story Lego

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11/23/2015 3:07 pm

Level 82 : Elite Fox

CraftyFoxe

Why did you underline everything? That is totally unneccesary and doesn't look good.

11/24/2015 10:48 am

Level 49 : Master Fox

LimeeFox

i don't remember if i wanted so or if it was an error xD

09/26/2015 7:31 am

Level 50 : Grandmaster Blob

Panda

Overrall it's not bad- I would go through and edit some of the spelling/wording and such before the due date though.

09/26/2015 7:42 am

Level 49 : Master Fox

LimeeFox

do you have examples on what to change?

09/26/2015 8:14 am

Level 50 : Grandmaster Blob

Panda

There are alot of capital letters that shouldn't be there. The plural of ninja is ninjas not ninja's. He seated unfortunately doesn't make sense. Pickaxe, screaming, <-- that's how it's spelt. Past tense of fall is fell, not falled. Past tense of drink is drank not drunk. Other than that I would just reword a few things, then you're good!

09/27/2015 1:47 am

Level 49 : Master Fox

LimeeFox

Ibwrote drunk because that means a person who drank too much alhool. They are called Drunk people.