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avatar LimeeFox
Level 38 : Artisan Fox
Today, a poem will be written
By Drostik, our builder
A Golem will be hidden
In phrases made of cinder

Once upon a time,
Hilarious of course,

Lovely snowman "Slime"
Decided to earn force
He was searching it a week
Until he got very weak

You would've wanted to ask why?
That's couse Slime wasn't that high

Poor man of snow the Slime
Had began to melt
But the almighty clime
Changed to sudden anti-melt

Taiga took the place of hot
Snowman-golem got like trot

The adventure now continues

Night is coming even faster
The snow-golem needs to rest
He will write a guide of crafter
After he has done the rest

For example put the tent,
The provisions
And fix dent
After that he took decisions:
To keep calm
And write a guide.

He took out his own PC
Then he opened PMC
He logged in his own account,
Gave a diamond to this draft
Then he went to chat with people
There the joyfuls were multiple

Wow, I didn't mention Steve
This time I can not believe!
Well, for now I will relief

On his way to the find the force
Slime has seen a special horse
This one had a guy on back
Steve was there chosing a deck

He was choosing it for battle
Because Zombies were on move
So that's how begun the battle
Snowman had one thing to prove

What was Slime created for?
What did Steve summon him for?
Slime's designed to protect
All the kindness and respect

That was moment of the truth
Slime has earned the force of youth

After zombies got defeated
Slime was honored and treated

That is how Slime found the force,
Just believe, you'll find yours!

Thanks so much for reading and I hope this was a nice poem. Please give a diamond to support me in the contest, good luck to every other contestants!

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  • Wyvern
  • Level 33
  • Artisan Dragon
  • December 29, 2016, 11:06 am
eh, I liked this, but some things can be better, like, avoiding rhyming words like 'week' and 'weak', because they're pronounced the same.

also in poems its best not to have things like Then, After, Before. etc.
still liked this :) good luck
  • LimeeFox
  • Level 38
  • Artisan Fox
  • December 29, 2016, 9:50 pm
Thanks! I will try to avoid those kind of mistakes next time! :)
  • SMeijers
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Architect
  • December 22, 2016, 6:56 am
Nice (-:
Nice, Love star wars so much~ dis is so good~ +1 diamond!
  • LimeeFox
  • Level 38
  • Artisan Fox
  • December 21, 2016, 8:27 am
Thank you <3
  • AmiChu
  • Level 12
  • Journeyman Pokemon
  • December 21, 2016, 4:27 am
This Is Amazing! .o. Diamond For Chu!!
  • LimeeFox
  • Level 38
  • Artisan Fox
  • December 21, 2016, 7:45 am
Thanks ;D

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