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The Walls Part 2 - First blood

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Hey guys! Welcome to the second part of my story!



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As the great sand walls fell I begin to see flashes of other teams. As I see that some teams have diamond armour, I fear this may be the end. I see one of my teammates scramble to open a chest and pull out a glowing bow. Then I see it. One of my teammates advancing on a man with leather armour. I try to jump off the skybase, but the man in golden armour pulls me back. "We have to help that man!" I yell. "No!" The man in golden armour tells me. "He is an enemy!". I watch in pure horror as my teammates slaughter the man in leather armour. Blood splatters on the ground. He is dead. His lifeless body rests against a tree. My teammates walk off into another cave. I hear another scream. Then I hear blocks being placed. I look out over the skybase. I see a man in diamond armour, with a bow, placing blocks in a tower. Then he pulls back the bow. I flinch in horror, waiting for the shot. Then the man in golden armour picks up his own bow. He shoots the man with the bow. The man with the bow fall off the tower. A deafening crack rings through the air. I watch as a man with no armour emerges from the trees, runs over to the dead man, strips him armour, and runs. I am scared beyond my worst nightmares. I watch in terror as the scene unfolds. Dead bodies soon litter the land.

Then, I hear blocks being placed again. And I also hear another sound. A kind of hissing sound. When I realise what it is, it is already to late. Before I know it I am flying through the air, screaming.

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08/03/2013 9:20 pm
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Nice story. I loved it. Diamond, favorited and subscribed
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08/03/2013 6:09 pm
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I really liked how you put a lot of detail into this story. I think you should try to indent and maybe split them into paragraphs. But I really did enjoy it. Keep up the good work :]!
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